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  1. Posted: November 18, 2015In: Horror

    A disgraced PR Fixer reluctantly unites with the ghost of his perverted first guest to save his families Hotel from being demolished.

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    Added an answer on December 1, 2015 at 12:20 am

    Hello, maybe you could?include in the logline how the main character and the ghost can save the hotel.

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    maybe you could?include in the logline how the main character and the ghost can save the hotel.

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  2. Posted: November 14, 2015In: Drama

    After his daughter is kidnapped, 48 hours before her heart surgery, a struggling stand-up comic must complete his contract to raise the ransom money.

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    Added an answer on November 15, 2015 at 11:20 pm

    Hello, I think that what the author means is that the stand up comedian must do his show and be funny to raise the money in a moment where he's angry and sad. I think the logline could be improuved focusing on the actions of the comedian: what -visually- the plot will be about? I personally don't thRead more

    Hello,
    I think that what the author means is that the stand up comedian must do his show and be funny to raise the money in a moment where he’s angry and sad. I think the logline could be improuved focusing on the actions of the comedian: what -visually- the plot will be about? I personally don’t think the ransom is well connected to the comedian world and I can’t understand the mood of the movie – a comedy or a drama?

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  3. Posted: November 12, 2015In: Adventure

    The gods an Irish programmer?s been praying to are real, and they have a task – find weapons from ancient Celtic myth or watch the human race be eradicated by a legion of dead tyrants.

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    Added an answer on November 12, 2015 at 7:42 pm

    Hello, why a programmer??I suggest to make clear why a programmer would be the most interesting character for this movie, or to ask yourself who would be the most interesting character for THIS?movie.

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    why a programmer??I suggest to make clear why a programmer would be the most interesting character for this movie, or to ask yourself who would be the most interesting character for THIS?movie.

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