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Rio, a waitress in a small Texas town, graduated high school last week, survived being burned alive yesterday and today discovered the reason why. She is descended from Quetzalcoatl, Aztec god of Light and Knowledge and their bloodline has been hunted by rival god, Tezcatlipoca, Aztec god of War and his descendants for millennia. After learning more about her lineage, Rio decides to take the fight to the enemy and make the hunters the prey.
Avoid the character names (names mean nothing, usually you don't want names in a logline where every word is precious). Avoid places too unless they are absolutely necessary to understand the story (in my opinion this is not the case in this story). "When a waitress discovers she's a descendant of aRead more
Avoid the character names (names mean nothing, usually you don’t want names in a logline where every word is precious). Avoid places too unless they are absolutely necessary to understand the story (in my opinion this is not the case in this story).
“When a waitress discovers she’s a descendant of an aztec god, she must fight a rival god if she wants to…” What is the main character real goal (not just “survive”)? what is her flow to overcome?
See lessFailed documentarian roams the New Mexico mountain hunting a story until he stumbles onto a cult of women crucifying drug dealers to purge sin. He believes he’s found the story of a lifetime if he can live to tell it. Breaking Bad meets The Lottery.
Hello, I LOVE the idea: the main character (failed documentarist) and the inciting incident (the crucifiction practices), PLEASE try to articulate the plot starting from that. Try to analyze "the wicker man" (the original and the remake), I think you can find ?some clues about how to structure yourRead more
Hello, I LOVE the idea: the main character (failed documentarist) and the inciting incident (the crucifiction practices), PLEASE try to articulate the plot starting from that. Try to analyze “the wicker man” (the original and the remake), I think you can find ?some clues about how to structure your story. Maybe the documentarist receive a call from an old friend or an ex collegue telling him to come to the town. ?When he founds his friend crucified. now he knows that he has a story for his documentary… je must understand what happens in the town and make his documentary at the risk of his own life. Something like that?
See lessA first date goes from zero to one hundred with an evening in a theme park. Sydney becomes the backdrop as the couple explore the city, doing and talking about everything you shouldn?t on a first date.
Hello, for me this logline is too vague even for a mumblecore movie. A boy meet a girl, they talk. Where's "the thing" ? I suggest you to try to write the logline for "before sunrise" and "midnight kiss", try to analyze those movies and find what makes them interesting.
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See lessfor me this logline is too vague even for a mumblecore movie.
A boy meet a girl, they talk. Where’s “the thing” ?
I suggest you to try to write the logline for “before sunrise” and “midnight kiss”, try to analyze those movies and find what makes them interesting.