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When a young psychic girl becomes the victim of abuse she must use her ethereal powers to stop the horror and find a path to normality.
Hello, logline are about being specific: try to tell exactly what?"stop the horror and find a path to normality" really means... visually. And what kind of psychic, and who abuses her (what kind of abuse).
Hello, logline are about being specific: try to tell exactly what?”stop the horror and find a path to normality” really means… visually. And what kind of psychic, and who abuses her (what kind of abuse).
See lessThe true story of the militant suffrage leader imprisoned in 1917 for picketing the White House and given 48 hours to prove her sanity or be committed to an insane asylum.
Hello, I like the idea and the title but I can't but the 48h deadline: it seems to me a very artificial device. I think that the logline must be clear about why she has 48hours (and not 24 or 72). Then I think that "to prove her sanity" is too vague, I honestly can't imagine what she can do (the morRead more
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See lessI like the idea and the title but I can’t but the 48h deadline: it seems to me a very artificial device. I think that the logline must be clear about why she has 48hours (and not 24 or 72). Then I think that “to prove her sanity” is too vague, I honestly can’t imagine what she can do (the more she says she’s right about her cause, the more everyone?will be convinced that she’s crazy).
As far as I’m concerned I prefere the Tony version, not because it’s more historically correct, but because it’s more believable and well detailed it could be more detailed with a clear antagonist).
When an eccentric skydiving physicist discovers he can skydive off cliffs, he must stay alive as he pushes the boundaries of this newfound way of life. ‘Sunshine Superman’
Hello, I think your movie has an interesting and original main character, and the idea that a 'theorician' must take action is a good trick to build a plot: try to analyze "Man's Favorite Sport?" where the main character is a professional fishing equipement clerk, very able to sell the equipement, bRead more
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See lessI think your movie has an interesting and original main character, and the idea that a ‘theorician’ must take action is a good trick to build a plot: try to analyze “Man’s Favorite Sport?” where the main character is a professional fishing equipement clerk, very able to sell the equipement, but in reality he can’t fish – when his boss send him to a fishing contest with a beautiful girl… Here the goal and the stakes are quite clear keep the job, win the girl). I think that you should work on the motivation of your character and on the conflict that will fuel the plot.