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A suicidal teen gets abducted from her boring life and is forced to compete in the ninetieth Trials, a three-staged competition that rewards the victor a cognitive transplantation with a coldhearted AI.
I agree with previous comments
I agree with previous comments
See lessWhen seven year old Olive needs to get to a far away beauty pageant her family accompanies her on an arduous road trip.
Hello, it should be labeled as "classic" since it's not an original logline.
Hello, it should be labeled as “classic” since it’s not an original logline.
See lessWhen the girl of his dreams buys him a drink, an agoraphobic movie projectionist must overcome the trauma of the death of his parents in order to take her on a date outside the arthouse cinema that he calls home.
I like the main character, maybe because he's original and because he has a clear flaw (he can't get out of his cinema theater world). The goal is clear, overcome his flaw to win the girl (this is less original but it's ok - just be focused on an original execution). The main problem is that the conRead more
I like the main character, maybe because he’s original and because he has a clear flaw (he can’t get out of his cinema theater world). The goal is clear, overcome his flaw to win the girl (this is less original but it’s ok – just be focused on an original execution).
See lessThe main problem is that the conflict is internal (overcome a trauma): usually in a logline we need to SEE the external conflict, which is visible, because this give the reader a better picture of what he will SEE in the movie. So my advice is to focus on what the main character does. You can even avoid the backstory in the logline (the trauma of the death of the mother) but be sure to include the external conflict.