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  1. Posted: November 1, 2015In: Thriller

    In a world where the police can get a warrant to search your memories, a former cop is implanted with murderous false memories and must find a way to have them removed before he’s caught and his mind read.

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    Added an answer on November 5, 2015 at 12:38 am

    I love it.

    I love it.

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  2. Posted: November 2, 2015In: Thriller

    In a disillusioned farmer’s quest for contentment he finds more than he bargained for when he houses a new ager couple who transpires to be savage doomsday preppers.

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    Added an answer on November 5, 2015 at 12:34 am

    When a disillusioned farmer?houses a new ager couple who transpires to be savage doomsday preppers... then what happens ? Focus on goal and conflict, ? the story is about what happens when the farmer discovers that the couple are?doomsday preppers. Sure it could be a good twist but you can't build tRead more

    When a disillusioned farmer?houses a new ager couple who transpires to be savage doomsday preppers… then what happens ? Focus on goal and conflict, ? the story is about what happens when the farmer discovers that the couple are?doomsday preppers. Sure it could be a good twist but you can’t build the whole movie about this twist that seems too occur early in the movie.

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  3. Posted: November 4, 2015In: Drama

    Two young men with opposite lives from opposite sides of the world unwittingly exchange destinies as one encounters the other, and the other encounters a vision of God.

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    Added an answer on November 5, 2015 at 12:11 am

    Hello, you can do better if you don't "explain" the story: try to tell the story instead.

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    you can do better if you don’t “explain” the story: try to tell the story instead.

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