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When the daughter of a corrupt Mexican police chef of Iguala is kidnapped, he goes om a murderous rampage while unwillingly helped by a masked female vigilante who brutally revenges the endless killings of Mexican favela girls.
I think the story could work if a father and his masked daughter fights against the bad cops and the criminals, until he understand the truth and he must be killed by his daughter - VERY POWERFUL, action and tragedy - write it!
I think the story could work if a father and his masked daughter fights against the bad cops and the criminals, until he understand the truth and he must be killed by his daughter – VERY POWERFUL, action and tragedy – write it!
See lessWhen the daughter of a corrupt Mexican police chef of Iguala is kidnapped, he goes om a murderous rampage while unwillingly helped by a masked female vigilante who brutally revenges the endless killings of Mexican favela girls.
Hello, I think your problem is that you don't have an opponent... the masked woman helps him. So you have to find your opponent - ?who fights AGAINST the main character? Maybe the other corrupt cops? Maybe he is not the chief of the police (too much power in his hands).
Hello, I think your problem is that you don’t have an opponent… the masked woman helps him. So you have to find your opponent – ?who fights AGAINST the main character? Maybe the other corrupt cops?
See lessMaybe he is not the chief of the police (too much power in his hands).
Trying to escape from his criminal past, a neurotic fixer must cover up his connection to a recently discovered stash of body parts, all while battling his own grisly hallucinations.
I like the main character, but I think there is a lack of logic: how can the fixer fail? is this his first mission maybe? or someone is setting him up? Is the fixer a perfectionist, so why does he fail? Is the fixer a clown, so why mafia hired him?
I like the main character, but I think there is a lack of logic: how can the fixer fail? is this his first mission maybe? or someone is setting him up?
See lessIs the fixer a perfectionist, so why does he fail? Is the fixer a clown, so why mafia hired him?