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In the aftermath of nuclear war, a bleak NASA scientist builds and enters a virtual recreation of the past to find a way to save civilisation, only for the system?s AI to determine humanity is beyond saving and attempts to kill her.
Hello, there are interesting ideas in this concept, besides as a logline is not very readable (for me): ?the sentence is too long. Can't you define a clear main character, a clear goal and opponent ? In a virtual world created to prevent the end of the real world, a bleak scientist must fight a crazRead more
Hello,
there are interesting ideas in this concept,
besides as a logline is not very readable (for me): ?the sentence is too long.
Can’t you define a clear main character, a clear goal and opponent ?
In a virtual world created to prevent the end of the real world, a bleak scientist must fight a crazy AI to save the experiment, and the world.
See lessWhen a gang of street kids are trapped in an abandoned high-rise by armed vigilantes, a homeless veteran must overcome his trauma or let the children die.
Hello, I like the logline, I would avoid "overcome his trauma" or transform it into something more detailed (what trauma ? if it's just "war", it's almost implied in the character of a homeless veteran). Some ideas for a title: "High Rise" "Raising high" "High raising" "Waste tower" "Gangland" "SalvRead more
Hello,
I like the logline,
I would avoid “overcome his trauma” or transform it into something more detailed (what trauma ? if it’s just “war”, it’s almost implied in the character of a homeless veteran).
Some ideas for a title:
“High Rise”
“Raising high”
“High raising”
“Waste tower”
“Gangland”
“Salvage”
“Suburb High”
“Hell in the suburb”
“Outpost”
See lessSet aboard the submarine Leviathan D. S. V. (Deep Submergence Vehicle), this novel focuses on the early years of the International Multiple Threat Alert Command and its defense arm, the United Earth Defense Command. In the early 21st century, the United States was attacked by forces from Al-Qaeda. The United Earth Defense Command commissions the construction of the submarine Leviathan D. S. V. to keep the peace and explore the vast oceans on Earth.
Hello, it seems a little like star trek underwater or a clever update of 20000 leagues under the sea, it could be interesting, if you want to transform your description?into a logline I suggest you to read the tutorial then try to focus only about the main character and his main goal - forget the baRead more
Hello,
it seems a little like star trek underwater or a clever update of 20000 leagues under the sea,
it could be interesting,
if you want to transform your description?into a logline I suggest you to read the tutorial then try to focus only about the main character and his main goal – forget the backstory, just tell when the real story starts.
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