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Deep in the trenches of a secret war against monsters that threaten humanity, a battle-weary young woman struggles to prepare her new trainee for combat when the truth behind her sister?s death on the frontlines comes to light.
One more thing, about the "laws of the universe fracture"... I would prefere to read what "visually" and concretely put the story in motion than an abstract analysis of the causes. Monsters? So start with "When monsters arise from a fracture in the space-time continuum" or something like that - I doRead more
One more thing, about the “laws of the universe fracture”…
See lessI would prefere to read what “visually” and concretely put the story in motion than an abstract analysis of the causes. Monsters? So start with “When monsters arise from a fracture in the space-time continuum” or something like that – I don’t care about the laws of the universe broken as far as my life is not affected. Not in an action movie. Try to give a better description of the monsters.
Deep in the trenches of a secret war against monsters that threaten humanity, a battle-weary young woman struggles to prepare her new trainee for combat when the truth behind her sister?s death on the frontlines comes to light.
Hello, I just want to join those who said that a mentor as main character is less "strong" than a training hero- Try to make clear who is the hero and write the logline from his point of view.
Hello,
See lessI just want to join those who said that a mentor as main character is less “strong” than a training hero- Try to make clear who is the hero and write the logline from his point of view.
A cold and withdrawn assassin, who uses her apocalyptic visions of the future to hunt targets in the present before they become a threat, finds herself hunted by a deadly, yet emotionally unstable, foe, and, in her bid to survive, she uncovers a future she never could have foreseen.
Hello, it's a little heavy as a reading, I suggest to make it shorter, one adjective only for the main character and the opponent maybe. I'm not an english native but I didn't know what a foe is... maybe there's a better word to identify the opponent? I'm not entirely happy with the ending, I'm notRead more
Hello,
it’s a little heavy as a reading, I suggest to make it shorter, one adjective only for the main character and the opponent maybe.
I’m not an english native but I didn’t know what a foe is… maybe there’s a better word to identify the opponent?
I’m not entirely happy with the ending, I’m not sure what I feel about it. It interests me because there is irony (someone who see the future who fail to understand one specific future – her own?). Usually I don’t like when a logline promises something (instead of telling things straight) but this thim it worked for me, I become curious. But, if you don’t have a big reveil in the movie, I’ll be highly disappointed. Theese are my personal feelings 🙂
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