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After missing a bank heist, a young gunman has to do battle with vengeful gangsters and his own Obsessive Compulsive Disorder.
Hello, I don't understand "missing" - he didn't show up or things went wrong or what? I suggest to be more specific about this. Maybe you can tell in onother way what is the main character's disorder, which is, in my opinion, the most original things in this concept. What is his obsession, his compuRead more
Hello,
I don’t understand “missing” – he didn’t show up or things went wrong or what? I suggest to be more specific about this.
See lessMaybe you can tell in onother way what is the main character’s disorder, which is, in my opinion, the most original things in this concept. What is his obsession, his compulsion? This is where the movie become interesting (to me).
a delusional and conniving narcissist manipulates an introverted millionaire, that’s undergoing a crisis, to room with him and his workaholic best friend to fund his ideas on becoming the next Elon Musk.
Hello, I would be interested in a movie that tracks the rise of the?"next Elon Musk", but I can't see this in the logline. I like the idea of the?"next Elon Musk" but I'd like to be able to understand that without you telling me this in this way (or at least not only in this way). I don't understandRead more
Hello, I would be interested in a movie that tracks the rise of the?”next Elon Musk”, but I can’t see this in the logline. I like the idea of the?”next Elon Musk” but I’d like to be able to understand that without you telling me this in this way (or at least not only in this way).
I don’t understand if the workhaolic is the friend of the main character or of the millionaire, anyway, this character isn’t really connected with the plot (it seems just a “allie” and?his?role can be avoided in the logline).
I suggest to include some reason to build empathy thowards the main character.
See lessA recent widow begins using the world?s most popular virtual reality game to escape the pain of real life, but when the game?s characters gain self awareness and start fighting back against the ?Human Invaders? she?ll need to find a way back to reality to survive.
One more thing, watch "Gamer" to get some inspiration: http://www.imdb.com/title/tt1034032/ And "Nirvana": http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0119794/ I imagine also that the woman could interact with a software engeneer in the real world who try to fix the problem from the outside, like the heros in the mRead more
One more thing, watch “Gamer” to get some inspiration:
http://www.imdb.com/title/tt1034032/
And “Nirvana”:
http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0119794/
I imagine also that the woman could interact with a software engeneer in the real world who try to fix the problem from the outside, like the heros in the matrix talking with the ‘operator’, this can add a layer to the story.
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