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When a na?ve woman meets a stalker online she must fight him off in order to return to her peaceful life.
Hello, I suggest you to include more details to build a stronger interest in the story. -What kind of actions she performs to fight the stalker? (going to the police :) ? -What kind of online stalking can be filmed in a visual way in the movie? Watch "unfriended", a whole movie on a computer screenRead more
Hello,
I suggest you to include more details to build a stronger interest in the story.
See less-What kind of actions she performs to fight the stalker? (going to the police 🙂 ?
-What kind of online stalking can be filmed in a visual way in the movie? Watch “unfriended”, a whole movie on a computer screen (very good), where some friends are ‘trolled’ by the ghost of a dead friend.
When an angry lonely drag queen moonlighting as a hit man, gets given one last job, he sets out to complete the hit, but the victim turns out to be his greatest fan and instead, together they hatch the perfect escape plan
Hello, I think this is a quite good concept, I suggest you to?work on a shorter and better writing, and to include at least one detail about the main plot (what kind of action they will perform to escape? I think that usually drag quenns refers to themselfs as females, I would do the same in the logRead more
Hello, I think this is a quite good concept,
I suggest you to?work on a shorter and better writing, and to include at least one detail about the main plot (what kind of action they will perform to escape?
I think that usually drag quenns refers to themselfs as females, I would do the same in the logline (not “his client”->”her client”).
one adjective is enough to characterize the main character (to smooth the reading). Think about the most relevant characteristic that make sense with the plot. I don’t feel very much “angry” and “lonely”… maybe lonely? Maybe “moonlighting as a hit man” is enough?
I?give it a try:
See less“When a drag queen -moonlighting as a hit man-?is hired to kill?her greatest fan, they must hatch the perfect plan to save their budding love”
When their last mission fails, three neurotic hit-men from three different times and civilizations are separately enlisted by a highly secretive organization to assassinate each other.
I personally disagree with the idea that 'to be vague' is an effective tool, except for the early stages of the writing process or for a tv-guide. I read many many books on the subject and no-one give value to be 'vague'. But this doesn't mean that we can't all be wrong. "A fierce fight ensues betweRead more
I personally disagree with the idea that ‘to be vague’ is an effective tool, except for the early stages of the writing process or for a tv-guide. I read many many books on the subject and no-one give value to be ‘vague’. But this doesn’t mean that we can’t all be wrong.
“A fierce fight ensues between the three all over the Earth and the centuries” this is science fiction in my opinion because in the real world this can’t happen. Or maybe I don’t get it right.
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