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  1. Posted: September 30, 2015In: Comedy

    Bleeding in the middle of a job, a hit woman must fight off a distressed woman for the last pack of tampons, before she misses her marked man.

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    Added an answer on September 30, 2015 at 7:11 pm

    One woman could fight for her date, the other for her career breaking meeting.

    One woman could fight for her date, the other for her career breaking meeting.

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  2. Posted: September 30, 2015In: Comedy

    Bleeding in the middle of a job, a hit woman must fight off a distressed woman for the last pack of tampons, before she misses her marked man.

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    Added an answer on September 30, 2015 at 7:09 pm

    Hello, this is original and interesting. I just can't see how a feature lenght movie can be built on this - is it for a short movie ? Maybe you can include in the logline what kind of "force" prevent the womens to go to another shop... ?I heard there was a "tampon" crisis in a south american countryRead more

    Hello,
    this is original and interesting.
    I just can’t see how a feature lenght movie can be built on this – is it for a short movie ? Maybe you can include in the logline what kind of “force” prevent the womens to go to another shop… ?I heard there was a “tampon” crisis in a south american country, this could be a surreal setting for a social satire?movie.

    http://www.theguardian.com/money/us-money-blog/2015/jan/08/tampon-shortage-argentina-foreign-creditors-import-trouble

    I give it a try :
    “With?the tampon?shortage?at its highest, two bleeding womens fights for?the last pack in town”

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  3. Posted: September 30, 2015In: Comedy

    When a business graduate of the new generation wants some money for his new business he is up against the best and wins.

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    Added an answer on September 30, 2015 at 6:54 pm

    Hello, I join those who said that you should be more specific. You are the master of your story, it's time to decide who is the main character, what buisiness, what/who is agaist the main character's goal?

    Hello,

    I join those who said that you should be more specific. You are the master of your story, it’s time to decide who is the main character, what buisiness, what/who is agaist the main character’s goal?

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