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when a dog savagely bites the hand of a colleague of a young vet; she must reattach it in order to save his life.
Hello, who is the main character? a doctor? a mother? a soldier? a vet? collegue in what job? is this for a short movie or a feature lenght? If it's for a feature lenght I think you should include more details about who is the opponent, what prevents the main character from accomplishing his goal.
Hello, who is the main character? a doctor? a mother? a soldier? a vet? collegue in what job?
See lessis this for a short movie or a feature lenght? If it’s for a feature lenght I think you should include more details about who is the opponent, what prevents the main character from accomplishing his goal.
When a man can?t afford to support his family he agrees to take part in a robbery with his friends in order to earn some much needed money.
then what happens? This?seems to me?just a starting situation.
then what happens? This?seems to me?just a starting situation.
See lessThree non-criminals out of pocket and out of luck hold up a convenient store to earn some much needed money.
Hello, maybe you can include some kind of opponent and a better characterization for the 3 'non-ciminals'. What happens? some details? The rob the store, so what? In this kind of movie you can't count only on funny dialogues. I?suggest you to take a step back and try to fit a standar logline format,Read more
Hello,
maybe you can include some kind of opponent and a better characterization for the 3 ‘non-ciminals’. What happens? some details? The rob the store, so what? In this kind of movie you can’t count only on funny dialogues.
I?suggest you to take a step back and try to fit a standar logline format, just to check if you have everything you need to fuel a whole movie :
See lessWhen [a major event happens: the inciting event that put the story in motion], [the Hero] must [do the main action], to win [his goal].