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  1. Posted: September 7, 2012In: Public

    Years after his son?s murder, a bitter gangster-vigilante trains a new recruit, but the young undercover commando is there to take the gang boss down?

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    Added an answer on September 7, 2012 at 10:08 am

    the gangster has a moral + psychological revelation, that his actions are not infallible. The kid (who's fallen in love with the gangster's daughter) also makes him see he's pushing what's left of his family away. They join forces against him...

    the gangster has a moral + psychological revelation, that his actions are not infallible. The kid (who’s fallen in love with the gangster’s daughter) also makes him see he’s pushing what’s left of his family away. They join forces against him…

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  2. Posted: September 7, 2012In: Public

    Years after his son?s murder, a bitter gangster-vigilante trains a new recruit, but the young undercover commando is there to take the gang boss down?

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    Added an answer on September 7, 2012 at 10:06 am

    but there's an act 3 twist - the kid commando has info (from his father's encrypted files) about the man who snatched and killed the gangster's son. Same man who set the gangster up to kill the young commando's dad. They have a common enemy...

    but there’s an act 3 twist – the kid commando has info (from his father’s encrypted files) about the man who snatched and killed the gangster’s son. Same man who set the gangster up to kill the young commando’s dad. They have a common enemy…

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  3. Posted: September 7, 2012In: Public

    Years after his son?s murder, a bitter gangster-vigilante trains a new recruit, but the young undercover commando is there to take the gang boss down?

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    Added an answer on September 7, 2012 at 9:22 am

    the kid overstays his leave, so becomes AWOL. The police are after him too, which makes the vigilante gangster warm to him even more...he doesn't find out the kid is there to kill him until the Act 2 climax - his all is lost moment - the kid he hoped was his new leader, his son and heir, is there toRead more

    the kid overstays his leave, so becomes AWOL. The police are after him too, which makes the vigilante gangster warm to him even more…he doesn’t find out the kid is there to kill him until the Act 2 climax – his all is lost moment – the kid he hoped was his new leader, his son and heir, is there to take him down…

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