1. Posted: September 2, 2012In:

    Struggling to relate to others, a pet psychiatrist spins out of control thanks to his estranged wife, a high school crush, and an obsessed cat owner.

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    I like the threefold Truby-esque opponents - however it feels like too much for the logline...I would ask: 1. What is the central conflict ? 2. Who causes the moral / psychological revelation ? 3. What forces him to change ?

    I like the threefold Truby-esque opponents – however it feels like too much for the logline…I would ask:

    1. What is the central conflict ?

    2. Who causes the moral / psychological revelation ?

    3. What forces him to change ?

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  2. Posted: September 7, 2012In:

    Years after his son?s murder, a bitter gangster-vigilante trains a new recruit, but the young undercover commando is there to take the gang boss down?

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    he's seeking revenge on the gang leader who killed his dad...but the main story is...the vigilante's obsession with protecting the world is tearing his family apart...

    he’s seeking revenge on the gang leader who killed his dad…but the main story is…the vigilante’s obsession with protecting the world is tearing his family apart…

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  3. Posted: September 7, 2012In:

    Years after his son?s murder, a bitter gangster-vigilante trains a new recruit, but the young undercover commando is there to take the gang boss down?

    Filmstar Penpusher

    against their common enemy...

    against their common enemy…

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