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As a cursed detective struggles to contain the wolf within, he suspects he is being framed for murder. In order to uncover the true killer, he must accept the wolf? or be lost to the beast forever.
I see what you mean. Ok, your original version has two goals: 1. Outward - uncover the true killer 2. Inner - accept the beast within. Great ! Some teachers say that the best stories are where the hero learns his need is greater than his goal and realizing the need helps him achieve his goal...so soRead more
I see what you mean.
Ok, your original version has two goals: 1. Outward – uncover the true killer 2. Inner – accept the beast within. Great !
Some teachers say that the best stories are where the hero learns his need is greater than his goal and realizing the need helps him achieve his goal…so something like:
A cursed detective, framed for murder, needs to accept his inner beast to uncover the true killer…
See lessAs a cursed detective struggles to contain the wolf within, he suspects he is being framed for murder. In order to uncover the true killer, he must accept the wolf? or be lost to the beast forever.
I would try to contain it one sentence. Do you have to give away that he's werewolf? Can you hint at it with 'cursed' and 'beast' ? A cursed detective, framed for murder, must accept his inner beast or be lost to it forever...
I would try to contain it one sentence. Do you have to give away that he’s werewolf? Can you hint at it with ‘cursed’ and ‘beast’ ?
A cursed detective, framed for murder, must accept his inner beast or be lost to it forever…
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yep, same story.
yep, same story.
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