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As a cursed detective struggles to contain the wolf within, he suspects he is being framed for murder. In order to uncover the true killer, he must accept the wolf? or be lost to the beast forever.
adjective even... lol
adjective even… lol
See lessAs a cursed detective struggles to contain the wolf within, he suspects he is being framed for murder. In order to uncover the true killer, he must accept the wolf? or be lost to the beast forever.
That's tight, man. Your story including inner and outer conflict in 19 words. Extremely tight. Since you have words to spare now, maybe you could intensify with an adverb (one of my passions) such as: 'A cursed detective ? framed for murder ? needs to accept the terrifying beast within in order to uRead more
That’s tight, man. Your story including inner and outer conflict in 19 words. Extremely tight.
Since you have words to spare now, maybe you could intensify with an adverb (one of my passions) such as:
‘A cursed detective ? framed for murder ? needs to accept the terrifying beast within in order to uncover the true killer…’
You could even add some inner freedom, from the ‘curse’ as well:
A cursed detective ? framed for murder ? needs to accept the beast within to uncover the true killer…and free himself from the curse forever?
See lessAs a cursed detective struggles to contain the wolf within, he suspects he is being framed for murder. In order to uncover the true killer, he must accept the wolf? or be lost to the beast forever.
I see you've crafted the need leads to goal in your plot - awesome.
I see you’ve crafted the need leads to goal in your plot – awesome.
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