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  1. Posted: September 9, 2012In: Public

    A blood spatter analyst by day / serial killer by night longs to share his dark secret, but can't for fear of losing those he loves…

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    Added an answer on September 9, 2012 at 12:37 pm

    for me Dexter is about his fear of being truly known...

    for me Dexter is about his fear of being truly known…

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  2. Posted: September 6, 2012In: Examples

    When a high school chemistry teacher struggling financially is diagnosed with cancer and health insurance wont cover the cost of treatment, he turns to cooking and selling crystal meth to secure a financial future for his family

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    Added an answer on September 9, 2012 at 12:18 pm

    great, altho I think we can lose 'and selling' ( we can guess that, if he's cooking and he's doing it for his family's future). Actually, originally he starts to cover the costs of the treatment right - $70,000 ? His family's future comes later... We could also lose 'struggling financially' - we gatRead more

    great, altho I think we can lose ‘and selling’ ( we can guess that, if he’s cooking and he’s doing it for his family’s future).

    Actually, originally he starts to cover the costs of the treatment right – $70,000 ? His family’s future comes later…

    We could also lose ‘struggling financially’ – we gather that if he has to start cooking meth to cover the treatment – it’s stating things twice….

    so…

    When a chemistry teacher is diagnosed with cancer and health insurance won’t cough up, he notches up a recipe for the purest ice on the planet, to cover the costs…

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  3. Posted: September 9, 2012In: Public

    On a dare a naive orphan tries to get aboard a legendary space ship, getting past an over zealous security guard, and back to the orphanage before dinner.

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    Added an answer on September 9, 2012 at 12:07 pm

    I like this too. However, I'm interested to know how this story pans (labrynth) out - is the script written or is it just a logline at the moment? I would suggest that what starts as a simple dare turns into a major mission and the orphan finds himself in a mission to save ... life as we know it ? ARead more

    I like this too. However, I’m interested to know how this story pans (labrynth) out – is the script written or is it just a logline at the moment?

    I would suggest that what starts as a simple dare turns into a major mission and the orphan finds himself in a mission to save … life as we know it ? An animal cruelty laboratory? Ace Ventura Pet detective in Space?

    His goal to get on and back has to go disastrously wrong… we need to get a sense of that…

    Is it comedy / sci fi ? Drama ? Which genre / genres ?

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