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  1. Posted: July 24, 2012In: Public

    A tough, feared gangster embarks on a rampage of killing to avenge his murdered son. But when his obsession for justice steals his presence from the rest of his family, he's forced to choose between avenging his son, or saving the family he loves.

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    Added an answer on July 24, 2012 at 3:56 pm

    When a gangster?s son is murdered his obsession for extrajudicial justice forces him to choose between revenge for the past or saving his family's future." 25 words. 'Kin A !

    When a gangster?s son is murdered his obsession for extrajudicial justice forces him to choose between revenge for the past or saving his family’s future.”

    25 words. ‘Kin A !

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  2. Posted: July 24, 2012In: Public

    A tough, feared gangster embarks on a rampage of killing to avenge his murdered son. But when his obsession for justice steals his presence from the rest of his family, he's forced to choose between avenging his son, or saving the family he loves.

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    Added an answer on July 24, 2012 at 3:53 pm

    reworked to be 25 words: "When a tough gangster's son is murdered his obsession for finding the killer forces him to choose between avenging the child he's lost or saving the daughter he loves."

    reworked to be 25 words:

    “When a tough gangster’s son is murdered his obsession for finding the killer forces him to choose between avenging the child he’s lost or saving the daughter he loves.”

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  3. Posted: May 25, 2012In: Public

    After a twisted psychopath is murdered, an evil entity targets the current lineage of those responsible to husk, and kill them to sate his revenge.

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    Added an answer on July 24, 2012 at 3:02 pm

    I've no idea what 'shucking means' - so it depends - do you expect your readers / producers / directors to look up words in their dictionaries - or do you only want to attract those who know the word. Being English (forgive me) it just reminds me of shucks and Shaggy from Scooby Doo. Movie sounds coRead more

    I’ve no idea what ‘shucking means’ – so it depends – do you expect your readers / producers / directors to look up words in their dictionaries – or do you only want to attract those who know the word. Being English (forgive me) it just reminds me of shucks and Shaggy from Scooby Doo. Movie sounds cool though, like Children of the Corn.

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