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  1. Posted: September 13, 2012In: Public

    A grieving London gangster recruits the tough new boyfriend of his suicidal daughter to help him hunt the killer of his son. But when he discovers her boyfriend is the son of one of his victims come for revenge, he must risk his daughter's life to take him down.

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    Added an answer on September 16, 2012 at 7:43 am

    "A grief-stricken London gangster plans to execute every child-killer on the register, but when the son of one of his victims comes for revenge his entire extrajudicial 'justice system' comes under threat."

    “A grief-stricken London gangster plans to execute every child-killer on the register, but when the son of one of his victims comes for revenge his entire extrajudicial ‘justice system’ comes under threat.”

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  2. Posted: September 13, 2012In: Public

    A grieving London gangster recruits the tough new boyfriend of his suicidal daughter to help him hunt the killer of his son. But when he discovers her boyfriend is the son of one of his victims come for revenge, he must risk his daughter's life to take him down.

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    Added an answer on September 15, 2012 at 9:41 pm

    OK, think we're getting there thanks to some feedback on twitter too. Basically, are the stakes higher with his entire "moral system" under threat (1) or his family under threat (2) ? 1. Intent on executing every known child-killer on the sex-offenders register, a grief-stricken gangster's entire juRead more

    OK, think we’re getting there thanks to some feedback on twitter too. Basically, are the stakes higher with his entire “moral system” under threat (1) or his family under threat (2) ?

    1. Intent on executing every known child-killer on the sex-offenders register, a grief-stricken gangster’s entire justice “system” comes under threat when the son of one of his victims comes for revenge.

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    2. When the son of a victim comes for revenge a grief-stricken gangster, intent on cleansing the UK of pedophiles, must learn the only way to save his family from destruction is to stop his rampage of killing.

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  3. Posted: September 13, 2012In: Public

    A grieving London gangster recruits the tough new boyfriend of his suicidal daughter to help him hunt the killer of his son. But when he discovers her boyfriend is the son of one of his victims come for revenge, he must risk his daughter's life to take him down.

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    Added an answer on September 15, 2012 at 7:57 pm

    or maybe 'grieving London gangster' to give an idea of genre and place: When the son of one of his victims targets his daughter a grieving London gangster, obsessed with executing every child-killer in England, learns the only way to save her is to stop his rampage of killing."

    or maybe ‘grieving London gangster’ to give an idea of genre and place:

    When the son of one of his victims targets his daughter a grieving London gangster, obsessed with executing every child-killer in England, learns the only way to save her is to stop his rampage of killing.”

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