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A grieving London gangster recruits the tough new boyfriend of his suicidal daughter to help him hunt the killer of his son. But when he discovers her boyfriend is the son of one of his victims come for revenge, he must risk his daughter's life to take him down.
Or: "When the son of one of his victims targets his daughter a grieving vigilante, obsessed with 'cleansing' England of every registered child-killer, learns the only way to save her is to stop his rampage of killing."
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“When the son of one of his victims targets his daughter a grieving vigilante, obsessed with ‘cleansing’ England of every registered child-killer, learns the only way to save her is to stop his rampage of killing.”
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Cool. Wow. Enjoy the process man. Especially the blood, sweat and tears ;)
Cool. Wow. Enjoy the process man. Especially the blood, sweat and tears 😉
See less14 year old Glitch, and Komako, the talking deer, must travel through a maze of unnerving, yet beautiful, interconnecting television worlds, in search of the one that resides in the human land, so Glitch can return home.
We don't need names in log lines. Check your paper for the loglines of movies on at the cinema now. You'll notice most don't have them. I'd rewrite it without the names as short as possible, with one adj. to describe the main character (s). e.g A talking deer must help his friend through a maze of iRead more
We don’t need names in log lines. Check your paper for the loglines of movies on at the cinema now. You’ll notice most don’t have them. I’d rewrite it without the names as short as possible, with one adj. to describe the main character (s).
e.g A talking deer must help his friend through a maze of interconnecting television worlds in search of the one that resides in the human land so he can return home.
But don’t take my word for it, wait to see what other feedback you get too…
Nice idea tho. Is it a story you’re working on or have you already finished the script ?
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