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When she is targeted by a rival tech firm for software code in her head, a closed off data courier with a photographic memory must finish her latest delivery to survive. Only problem: For some reason, she can’t remember ever accepting the job.
How can she have a photographic memory and not remember taking a job both at the same time? I would think ?1 or the other.
How can she have a photographic memory and not remember taking a job both at the same time? I would think ?1 or the other.
See lessFollowing a near-death experience, a down to earth cop discovers a secret society of astral travelers are manipulating major events in the physical world and works to prevent an imminent attack he suspects they are planning.
Agreed with above, You are mentioning a serious experience, and that's great that it is noteworthy for the MC, and it may very well be super important to the plot, but as written for this logline, how does it relate? The economics of logline writing stress less words = more effect. You can save yourRead more
Agreed with above,
You are mentioning a serious experience, and that’s great that it is noteworthy for the MC, and it may very well be super important to the plot, but as written for this logline, how does it relate?
The economics of logline writing stress less words = more effect. You can save your first 5 immediately. I also don’t like “down to Earth” to describe the MC. Think of something better for this.
How about hinting at what this secret group is after? How is the MC tied into them?
Good luck.
Tony.
See lessWhen a billionaire futurist is killed, a vengeful ex-assassin is forced to confront her sanity as she fights to discover who has been manipulating her memories to make her the world?s most feared killer.
Yet still, what is the connection between an innocent billionaire getting killed and your anti hero, the assassin? Going from a hitman to an army ranger is quite a drastic change. What prompted that?
Yet still, what is the connection between an innocent billionaire getting killed and your anti hero, the assassin?
Going from a hitman to an army ranger is quite a drastic change. What prompted that?
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