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  1. Posted: October 19, 2018In: Thriller

    When a nasty policeman tries to end the life of a journalist using all means of soft torture, the latter fights him back until the policeman dies with hard death.

    giannisggeorgiou Samurai
    Added an answer on October 19, 2018 at 10:29 pm

    Avoid needless words and don't tell us the ending. A [PERSONALITY ADJECTIVE] journalist must escape from the basement of a sadistic policeman, who intends to torture him to death.

    Avoid needless words and don’t tell us the ending.

    A [PERSONALITY ADJECTIVE] journalist must escape from the basement of a sadistic policeman, who intends to torture him to death.

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  2. Posted: October 13, 2018In: Drama

    A devoted husband must choose between love or life, when his blind, elderly wheelchair-bound wife attempts to persuade him to join her in undergoing euthanasia.

    giannisggeorgiou Samurai
    Added an answer on October 14, 2018 at 1:10 am

    #1 From the 3 logline elements (Event, Character, and Action) you have Event and Character. Your Action, though, is "choosing between A and B." Choosing is a momentary action, not one that can sustain a feature story. Think: what action can keep the Second Act going? That kind of action (pursuit, goRead more

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    From the 3 logline elements (Event, Character, and Action) you have Event and Character. Your Action, though, is “choosing between A and B.”

    Choosing is a momentary action, not one that can sustain a feature story. Think: what action can keep the Second Act going? That kind of action (pursuit, goal, objective) ia what you are looking for.

    #2
    Why choosing to die with her is “love?” If she loved him, she would want him to live and find happiness. At least, that’s what I think. Others, too

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  3. Posted: October 12, 2018In: Romance

    Drawn to older men, an idealistic teenager starts dating an unmarried software engineer and is forced to choose between free will to love with her heart or obey societal norms to appease the locals.

    giannisggeorgiou Samurai
    Added an answer on October 13, 2018 at 5:40 am

    I agree with everything already said. Also: what is the big deal? Old men with young women has always been a clich?. There are some movies that also explore the reverse (Harold and Maude, Fear Eats the Soul, et al). What I'm saying is: age difference is not a very convincing taboo anymore. What's soRead more

    I agree with everything already said.

    Also: what is the big deal? Old men with young women has always been a clich?. There are some movies that also explore the reverse (Harold and Maude, Fear Eats the Soul, et al).

    What I’m saying is: age difference is not a very convincing taboo anymore. What’s so special about your story’s couple?

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