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  1. Posted: October 5, 2019In: Family

    In order to progress through heaven’s gates,? ghosts must pay penance by returning to earth and helping the people they hurt.

    giannisggeorgiou Samurai
    Added an answer on October 5, 2019 at 7:14 pm

    "Stuck in limbo, the spirit of a cold blooded hitman must save the daughter of his latest victim from the mafia boss who hired him, in order to rest in peace." Or: "Stuck in limbo, the spirit of a cold-blooded hitman must save a girl from the mafia boss who hired him to kill her father, in order toRead more

    “Stuck in limbo, the spirit of a cold blooded hitman must save the daughter of his latest victim from the mafia boss who hired him, in order to rest in peace.”

    Or:

    “Stuck in limbo, the spirit of a cold-blooded hitman must save a girl from the mafia boss who hired him to kill her father, in order to rest in peace.”

    I wanted to make “people they hurt” more specific and what can hurt more than murder? (Maybe lots of things, but murder will do just fine.)

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  2. Posted: September 20, 2019In: Horror

    After starting a commune in the aftermath of Woodstock, a group of hippies has to resort to stealing from a hermit chicken farmer. All goes well until they kill his favorite hen… Now it?s his time to kill.

    giannisggeorgiou Samurai
    Added an answer on September 29, 2019 at 11:04 pm

    "In Woodstock's aftermath, after stealing a chicken from an old hermit's farm, a hippy and her friends must survive his chainsaw rampage. Or whatever his rampage looks like. I also suggest you give a clue of the protagonist's flaw, so that you hint some inner journey?although in a horror premise thaRead more

    “In Woodstock’s aftermath, after stealing a chicken from an old hermit’s farm, a hippy and her friends must survive his chainsaw rampage.

    Or whatever his rampage looks like.

    I also suggest you give a clue of the protagonist’s flaw, so that you hint some inner journey?although in a horror premise that may be too much.

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  3. Posted: September 22, 2019In: Family

    ? ?Dos j?venes mujeres, desnudan sus virtudes y miserias cuando embarazos no deseados las arrojan ante una realidad que las asecha voraz?

    giannisggeorgiou Samurai
    Added an answer on September 29, 2019 at 10:08 pm

    En ingles, por favor! Many of us are not native English speakers (I am Greek, for example), but we can't all make this site look like the Babel Tower. English is an adequate and helpful convention, don't you think? Gracias!

    En ingles, por favor!

    Many of us are not native English speakers (I am Greek, for example), but we can’t all make this site look like the Babel Tower. English is an adequate and helpful convention, don’t you think?

    Gracias!

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