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A dedicated and passionate elementary school teacher attempts to win over his female co-worker but a sexual experience forced upon by a guy challenges everything in his life.
I think Paul nailed it to me. I guess the main issue with this concept is that it is too much of an inner journey and that there isn't enough to make this an A story. It's interesting because to me, I'm actually interested in the B story. This has been a good lesson in what not to do when writing aRead more
I think Paul nailed it to me. I guess the main issue with this concept is that it is too much of an inner journey and that there isn’t enough to make this an A story.
It’s interesting because to me, I’m actually interested in the B story.
This has been a good lesson in what not to do when writing a script in the beginning phase so I’m glad I posted this logline and discovered this website.
I have been struggling with the concept of this idea and the points above explain why. I do want to finish this since I started it anyway and just move on to something else with a protagonist that has more of an outer journey next time. I feel like I have stronger ideas for screenplays anyway and this has really been an eye opener for me.
Paul Clarke. In the lowest point, the protagonist does lose his job and his reputation over it, plus he hurts others in the process.
See lessA dedicated and passionate elementary school teacher attempts to win over his female co-worker but a sexual experience forced upon by a guy challenges everything in his life.
The way it's written, you don't see the blowjob actually happening. It's more or less implied or you might hear some moaning sounds for a couple of seconds. You never see it happening though. I just want to make that clear. He also isn't gay. He's bicurious, hence the name of the script. I guess notRead more
The way it’s written, you don’t see the blowjob actually happening. It’s more or less implied or you might hear some moaning sounds for a couple of seconds. You never see it happening though. I just want to make that clear. He also isn’t gay. He’s bicurious, hence the name of the script. I guess not everyone will know what that means but there is a point early on the script where it’s explained to some extent.
As for me, I can relate to this character and this is a story I am passionate about. This character is at an odd moment in his life and he does want to be with his co-teacher. So he does know what he wants. He just has insecurities and obstacles he has to face.
Whether this sells, gets made, etc. doesn’t really matter to me right now. I know it’s an odd concept that not everyone will get but the way it’s written, it’s done in a commercial, humurous way where the reader, I think will enjoy it.
I’m still working on it and having a goal to finish by the end of next month.
But I am curious to know what others think as well.
I do agree with you that maybe there is an issue because it is an inner conflict more than an outer conflict. Perhaps that is something I need to reconsider.
I do appreciate your feedback. Thanks.
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I'm not sure if that's enough to make a movie though. I hate saying this but is this idea "high concept" enough? Is it going to be interesting to read or watch? I'm not sure. I guess it depends in how it's written. If it is a story you are really passionate about than by all means write it. I'm justRead more
I’m not sure if that’s enough to make a movie though. I hate saying this but is this idea “high concept” enough? Is it going to be interesting to read or watch? I’m not sure. I guess it depends in how it’s written. If it is a story you are really passionate about than by all means write it. I’m just giving my two cents.
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