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A group of high school kids discover how to time travel, but fail to recognize the potential consequences.
This is "Situation over Story." If we did the same thing for 'Back to the Future' we'd get almost the exact same logline.
This is “Situation over Story.”
If we did the same thing for ‘Back to the Future’ we’d get almost the exact same logline.
See lessA nerdy kid from New York City moves to Oakland and tries to get the most popular girl in school to ask him out.
This is a very solid logline. The genre is clear, the protag is there (complete with flaw) and the goal is pretty obvious. The only thing (and this is me being picky) is maybe putting in why he wants the most popualr girl in the school to ask him out. Is the inciting incident his move to New York? oRead more
This is a very solid logline. The genre is clear, the protag is there (complete with flaw) and the goal is pretty obvious.
The only thing (and this is me being picky) is maybe putting in why he wants the most popualr girl in the school to ask him out.
Is the inciting incident his move to New York? or is it the event that forces him to realise that he needs the most popular girl to ask him out?
It just feels a little thin right now and i think this could make it a little better…but i still think its a great premise. good luck
See lessDiscovering they're demigoddesses and guardians of four mystical keys, a geeky push over, her estranged little sister, her former high school bully and her best frienemy must unite against a evil fallen goddess seeking to use the keys to reclaim her true power and enslave the planet.
You have all the key parts here for a logline, there's just way way to much going on to the point where it gets confusing. The best way to clear this up is pick a main character. Although there are the four girls in this, one should be the 'leader' and therefore the protag. Centre the logline aroundRead more
You have all the key parts here for a logline, there’s just way way to much going on to the point where it gets confusing.
The best way to clear this up is pick a main character. Although there are the four girls in this, one should be the ‘leader’ and therefore the protag.
Centre the logline around her (still mention that there are another three) but make sure that you centre the POV around the one.
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