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  1. Posted: June 5, 2013In: Examples

    Acting in concert, birds start attacking people for no apparent reason.

    Jean-Marie Mazaleyrat Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 10, 2013 at 5:49 pm

    And what is magical ... It appears just when I post the copy above! :-)

    And what is magical … It appears just when I post the copy above! 🙂

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  2. Posted: June 5, 2013In: Examples

    Acting in concert, birds start attacking people for no apparent reason.

    Jean-Marie Mazaleyrat Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 10, 2013 at 5:47 pm

    Hi Tony, I see in my email box that you posted a message which don't appear here, but I have no sufficient permissions to approve it (this is a problem with my Worldpress account I think). I put it bellow: Tony Edward says : You're right dpg... A logline is as formulaic as the story / film it's reprRead more

    Hi Tony,
    I see in my email box that you posted a message which don’t appear here, but I have no sufficient permissions to approve it (this is a problem with my Worldpress account I think).
    I put it bellow:

    Tony Edward says :

    You’re right dpg… A logline is as formulaic as the story / film it’s representing… IMO, the only rule is that you’ve got to be as true to yourself and your story as possible… A good logline draws me in because it implies an interesting struggle, against oneself or an external force, and the stakes are high for both success or failure. It needs to ring true, as in, be logical, but also be different — stand out….

    There should be no ‘standard’ logline in the same way there should be no ‘standard’ film.

    Great thread dpg and Jean ; |

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  3. Posted: June 5, 2013In: Examples

    Acting in concert, birds start attacking people for no apparent reason.

    Jean-Marie Mazaleyrat Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 10, 2013 at 5:32 pm

    We tend to judge people as ourselves If he were less loyal, honest and confident, he would be more suspicious about Comodus. and he is had twice by Comodus: - At the beginning - And at the end when Comodus wounds him with his dagger before the fight.

    We tend to judge people as ourselves
    If he were less loyal, honest and confident, he would be more suspicious about Comodus.
    and he is had twice by Comodus:
    – At the beginning
    – And at the end when Comodus wounds him with his dagger before the fight.

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