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  1. Posted: June 5, 2013In: Examples

    Acting in concert, birds start attacking people for no apparent reason.

    Jean-Marie Mazaleyrat Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 12, 2013 at 2:30 am

    Hi Guys I put three new topics in Classics about three non conventional movies

    Hi Guys

    I put three new topics in Classics about three non conventional movies

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  2. Posted: June 10, 2013In: Public

    When the body of the Mayor's son is discovered on the reservation and a young indian is accused, the local cop must go back to his own Indian culture to solve the case and learn to accept his own heritage.

    Jean-Marie Mazaleyrat Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 11, 2013 at 2:23 am

    I think so! I think about two movies I've seen close to this plot: - "In the heat of the night" with Sidney Poitier - "Just cause" with Sean Connery and about an other one in wich the subplot is: - "In the electric mist" with Tommy Lee Jones. These three stories take place in the South (Louisiana orRead more

    I think so!

    I think about two movies I’ve seen close to this plot:
    – “In the heat of the night” with Sidney Poitier
    – “Just cause” with Sean Connery
    and about an other one in wich the subplot is:
    – “In the electric mist” with Tommy Lee Jones.

    These three stories take place in the South (Louisiana or Mississipi) on a background of racism.
    But in these the hero is not directly concerned by the murder:

    – Sidney Poitier is a black cop from philadelphia who is there by chance and helps out the local sheriff
    – Sean Connery is an attorney who defend a black man sentenced to death for moral reasons
    – Tommy lee Jones is a sheriff who investigate about the murder of a black young man he witnessed when he was a boy, upon an other enquiry.

    What is interesting in your story is the journey of your hero to the roots of his cultural and social heritage. This can be a great movie.

    I think that we could find something close to that in some old westerns (I don’t remember wich ones), but it was not dealt with as we would today. I’ll search.

    Can you make your logline shorter?

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  3. Posted: June 10, 2013In: Public

    A veteran goes to war against a crew of corrupt cops intent on controlling the US / Mexico border.

    Jean-Marie Mazaleyrat Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 11, 2013 at 1:44 am

    I see a hero, a quest, antagonists and a conflict, a flaw (he is old and alone), a tone... All I need to be interested... in 18 words.

    I see a hero, a quest, antagonists and a conflict, a flaw (he is old and alone), a tone…
    All I need to be interested… in 18 words.

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