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  1. Posted: June 9, 2013In: Public

    -TAKE #2- After being fired for accidentally killing the Hero, a disgraced 'minion of the warlord' is conscripted by the local village to become their champion and face his former evil boss.

    Jean-Marie Mazaleyrat Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 10, 2013 at 3:34 am

    Hi you two, IMO (I just understood today what it means!), This is a movie for both occidental and oriental targets: - Martial arts movies are successful in occident (Bruce Lee, Jackie Chan, the seven samourais,...) and we like epic stories. - Asians like them too, even more if it is related to theirRead more

    Hi you two,

    IMO (I just understood today what it means!), This is a movie for both occidental and oriental targets:
    – Martial arts movies are successful in occident (Bruce Lee, Jackie Chan, the seven samourais,…) and we like epic stories.
    – Asians like them too, even more if it is related to their own History.

    I see two difficulties to make it in China:
    – A lot of martial arts movies are already made in China and chinese are most protectionist than Hollywood. However, the entry gate for chinese cinema is Honk Kong.
    – Chinese culture construction is complex, with a lot of codes and paradigms harder to understand than three-acts-construction, protagonist VS antagonist or Hero’s Journey. If you want to do it, I think that you must deeply explore the Chinese culture and History, espacially the “Wuxia” phenomenon. Great lines as similar to ours as it match with the Campbell’s Hero’s Journey, but the differences are in every details of everything in life.

    Your chinese audience may find your story like you find my english sometimes!
    Maybe they will enjoy better a good occidental movie about their cultural heritage than a strange Chinese movie.

    Below some links:
    https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Youxia
    http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wuxia
    http://fantasybookcritic.blogspot.fr/2013/03/guest-post-writing-wuxia-as-chinese.html (don’t know if is good)

    And recent movie made in Honk-Kong with surprising special effects (In accordance with my taste, this is not the best of the genre, but maybe it is what chinese like?):
    http://www.dailymotion.com/video/xnloiu_wu-xia-vostfr-partie-1_shortfilms#.UbSv0vnwaSo

    An other link (better I think) on Youtube: http://www.youtube.com/user/ancientseries

    I hope this will be helpful.

    All the best.

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  2. Posted: June 9, 2013In: Public

    -TAKE #2- After being fired for accidentally killing the Hero, a disgraced 'minion of the warlord' is conscripted by the local village to become their champion and face his former evil boss.

    Jean-Marie Mazaleyrat Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 10, 2013 at 12:05 am

    Due to my broken english, it seems to me that words like "fired", "boss" don't match very well with a martial arts China's middle-age story. JM

    Due to my broken english, it seems to me that words like “fired”, “boss” don’t match very well with a martial arts China’s middle-age story.

    JM

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  3. Posted: June 8, 2013In: Public

    After being fired for accidentally killing the hero, a bumbling minion is conscripted by the local village to defeat the Warlord.

    Jean-Marie Mazaleyrat Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 9, 2013 at 11:54 pm

    Hi you two, I think that we realy need to find an other word than "Minion", ... because it definitely makes me thinking to "DESPICABLE ME", and I'm afraid it will be quite the same for a lot of people. Isn't it ? :-( All the best.

    Hi you two,

    I think that we realy need to find an other word than “Minion”, … because it definitely makes me thinking to “DESPICABLE ME”, and I’m afraid it will be quite the same for a lot of people. Isn’t it ? 🙁

    All the best.

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