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  1. Posted: June 9, 2013In: Public

    -TAKE #2- After being fired for accidentally killing the Hero, a disgraced 'minion of the warlord' is conscripted by the local village to become their champion and face his former evil boss.

    Jean-Marie Mazaleyrat Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 9, 2013 at 8:44 pm

    Hi Richie I didn't see this new chat before, so I gave you some proposals on the previous.

    Hi Richie

    I didn’t see this new chat before, so I gave you some proposals on the previous.

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  2. Posted: June 8, 2013In: Public

    After being fired for accidentally killing the hero, a bumbling minion is conscripted by the local village to defeat the Warlord.

    Jean-Marie Mazaleyrat Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 9, 2013 at 8:09 pm

    Possibly better: After accidentally killing the Youxia protector of a village, a dismissed draftee is trained by the Elder to fight his former Warlord (23 words) And with Li Li: After accidentally killing the Youxia protector of a village and despite the late?s lover hostility, a dismissed draftee iRead more

    Possibly better:

    After accidentally killing the Youxia protector of a village, a dismissed draftee is trained by the Elder to fight his former Warlord (23 words)

    And with Li Li:

    After accidentally killing the Youxia protector of a village and despite the late?s lover hostility, a dismissed draftee is trained by the Elder to fight his former Warlord (29 words)

    JM

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  3. Posted: June 8, 2013In: Public

    After being fired for accidentally killing the hero, a bumbling minion is conscripted by the local village to defeat the Warlord.

    Jean-Marie Mazaleyrat Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 9, 2013 at 7:57 pm

    I love the idea of an accidental hero type character such as Woody Allen! :-) JM

    I love the idea of an accidental hero type character such as Woody Allen! 🙂

    JM

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