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  1. Posted: June 6, 2013In: Public

    Acting in concert, objects start to refuse to be a part of bad actions for no apparent reason

    Jean-Marie Mazaleyrat Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 9, 2013 at 5:41 am

    Hi kb, Thanks. This is nice. I don't know if it is by Hitchcock, but many of his were as long, and it sounds better as a selling logline than the "official" one wich sounds rather as a tagline: "Acting in concert, birds start attacking people for no apparent reason" An other of my favorite movies isRead more

    Hi kb,

    Thanks.

    This is nice.
    I don’t know if it is by Hitchcock, but many of his were as long, and it sounds better as a selling logline than the “official” one wich sounds rather as a tagline:
    “Acting in concert, birds start attacking people for no apparent reason”

    An other of my favorite movies is “To catch a thief”: +++
    “When a reformed jewel thief is suspected of returning to his former occupation, he must ferret out the real thief in order to prove his innocence.”
    We need the poster in addition to understand that it is a romance!

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  2. Posted: May 27, 2013In: Public

    On the run from a determined street enforcer, a young Londoner will do anything and everything to avoid capture but the enforcer has pledged to kill himself in the event of failure.

    Jean-Marie Mazaleyrat Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 9, 2013 at 4:20 am

    I think this is a great idea >>[Two sides as if the drifter is the incarnation of the enforcer's shadow and vica-versa which is why initially they hold each other in such mutual contempt.] + >>The drifter as the incarnation of the enforcer?s shadow? Hmm. Interesting. I?ll give it some thRead more

    I think this is a great idea

    >>[Two sides as if the drifter is the incarnation of the enforcer’s shadow and vica-versa which is why initially they hold each other in such mutual contempt.]

    +

    >>The drifter as the incarnation of the enforcer?s shadow? Hmm. Interesting. I?ll give it some thought. It is an unusual relationship. There is a key moment when the enforcer saves the drifter?s life ? on a point of honour.
    Forces greater than the two individuals have set them against each other. So, they are only fulfilling their destiny. They are doing what their biology wants them to do.

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  3. Posted: May 27, 2013In: Public

    On the run from a determined street enforcer, a young Londoner will do anything and everything to avoid capture but the enforcer has pledged to kill himself in the event of failure.

    Jean-Marie Mazaleyrat Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 9, 2013 at 2:51 am

    Maybe we can remove "the possesion": A fearsome noble enforcer and an evasive penniless drifter confront each other up to death in London slums for a big bundle of dirty money wich could save innocent lives?

    Maybe we can remove “the possesion”:

    A fearsome noble enforcer and an evasive penniless drifter confront each other up to death in London slums for a big bundle of dirty money wich could save innocent lives?

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