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On the run from a determined street enforcer, a young Londoner will do anything and everything to avoid capture but the enforcer has pledged to kill himself in the event of failure.
Hi kb, I was just gone do the shopping for the next week. I'm back! What is your solution? I'll give you the problem. :-)
Hi kb,
I was just gone do the shopping for the next week.
I’m back!
What is your solution? I’ll give you the problem. 🙂
See lessWhen a reclusive writer tries to save her identical twin from spousal abuse, she sparks an entourage where all trails lead to a Scottish village and the dark secret of her suppressed memory is revealed in the climax of the church's fundraising bachelor auction.
Hi LorraineSF, Hi Richiev, This is a long logline that arouses many questions : - Does spousal abuse comes from her husband, or from her sister?s ? - I don?t understand very well what "she sparks an antourage" means, what is due to my broken english, I think - "a scottish village AND the dark secretRead more
Hi LorraineSF,
Hi Richiev,
This is a long logline that arouses many questions :
– Does spousal abuse comes from her husband, or from her sister?s ?
– I don?t understand very well what “she sparks an antourage” means, what is due to my broken english, I think
– “a scottish village AND the dark secret”: this ? AND ? oddly cuts the line in two parts which don?t seems to have something to do together
– “the climax of the church’s fundraising bachelor auction? (something funny) is jarring this the tone of the rest (anxiety, suspense)
– What happens afterwards?
I would prefer something like:
When a reclusive writer tries to save her twin from spousal abuse, all trails lead to a Scottish village where she will be leave facing the dark secret of her suppressed memory? (32words)
See lessAfter being fired for accidentally killing the hero, a bumbling minion is conscripted by the local village to defeat the Warlord.
Hi Richiev, The killed hero is a Y?uxi? and your hero is his young novice, isn't it? What about this? "After accidentally killing his master, a Youxia?s novice is trained by the village Elder despite the (initial) irritation of the late master?s lover to defeat the Warlord, "
Hi Richiev,
The killed hero is a Y?uxi? and your hero is his young novice, isn’t it?
What about this?
“After accidentally killing his master, a Youxia?s novice is trained by the village Elder despite the (initial) irritation of the late master?s lover to defeat the Warlord, “
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