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  1. Posted: June 6, 2013In: Public

    Acting in concert, objects start to refuse to be a part of bad actions for no apparent reason

    Jean-Marie Mazaleyrat Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 8, 2013 at 8:29 pm

    Hello you two, I just wanted to tell that this post is about an idea and I did'nt work on. I have to focus on "Who scanned XX" to enter some contests this summer. My first intention was to do something with several threads like "Mars Attacks", because it would be a worldwide phenomenon. Are you inteRead more

    Hello you two,

    I just wanted to tell that this post is about an idea and I did’nt work on.
    I have to focus on “Who scanned XX” to enter some contests this summer.

    My first intention was to do something with several threads like “Mars Attacks”, because it would be a worldwide phenomenon.

    Are you interested in the development of this idea?

    All the best.

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  2. Posted: June 5, 2013In: Examples

    Acting in concert, birds start attacking people for no apparent reason.

    Jean-Marie Mazaleyrat Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 8, 2013 at 8:06 pm

    Hello you two, May I tell you the way I undestand Liar Liar : - Fletcher is both the protagonist and the antagonist: a two-faced people like JANUS (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Janus) - His heroe?s journey will makes him able to switch the two. - That perfectly concord with the myth of JANUS who waRead more

    Hello you two,

    May I tell you the way I undestand Liar Liar :

    – Fletcher is both the protagonist and the antagonist: a two-faced people like JANUS (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Janus)
    – His heroe?s journey will makes him able to switch the two.
    – That perfectly concord with the myth of JANUS who was the god of beginnings, transitions and endings.

    Beginning:
    – Fletcher-One is a liar and according to his way of life, this is a force. His flaw is his son?s vow which prevents him to lie.
    – Fletcher-Two loves his son, he likes to play with him… His flaw is that he is a liar giving precedence to his job and breaking his promises.

    Transition:
    – Fletcher-One tries desperatly to delay the case, then wins without liying when he discocers his client lay about her age, making her marriage invalid.
    – Fletcher-Two discovers that his client is interested only by money, then shouts at the judge to reverse the decision, what makes him taken to jail for contempt of court. This makes him able to undestand his situation towards his son and his ex-wife.

    Ending:
    – Fletcher-One is dead in jail as a liar.
    – Fletcher-Two struggles to win back his son and his wife, and wins.

    JANUS should be the god of screenwriters, I think.

    All the best.

    JM 🙂

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  3. Posted: June 1, 2013In: Public

    Here's just the concept, not an actual logline What if currency never existed ? but instead we had to trade memory's ? Our whole life's are basically memory's, we never live in the present. So what if, in the future, all of society traded in run down memory's, stored in banks. The higher class members of society are ridden with memory's. Then you have the lower class people, left to rot on the street with no memory's what so ever. There is a corrupt government which steals taxes of memory from you every month, and if you run out of memory's, you are taken in to cell 5, also known as shutdown to be 'rehabilitated'. If you want a loaf of bread that would cost you a mere memory of the last 5 minute road trip, new Aston martin ? that could cost you up to a months worth of memory's, even more. Many of you may look at this concept and think ''what a load of shit'' but it's still early days, as i'v only just started developing it. Any constructive criticism will be great !

    Jean-Marie Mazaleyrat Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 8, 2013 at 3:58 am

    And about this famous actress Richiev was talking about, it seems to me that she was sarah Bernhart in 1920 (uh... she was 58 and had a peg leg) :-(

    And about this famous actress Richiev was talking about, it seems to me that she was sarah Bernhart in 1920 (uh… she was 58 and had a peg leg) 🙁

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