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  1. Posted: May 27, 2013In: Public

    On the run from a determined street enforcer, a young Londoner will do anything and everything to avoid capture but the enforcer has pledged to kill himself in the event of failure.

    Jean-Marie Mazaleyrat Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 9, 2013 at 2:44 am

    What about these? "A fearsome noble enforcer and an evasive penniless drifter confront each other up to death for the possession a big bundle of dirty money wich could save innocent lives" (29 words) or with reference to London: "A fearsome noble enforcer and an evasive penniless drifter confront eaRead more

    What about these?

    “A fearsome noble enforcer and an evasive penniless drifter confront each other up to death for the possession a big bundle of dirty money wich could save innocent lives” (29 words)

    or with reference to London:

    “A fearsome noble enforcer and an evasive penniless drifter confront each other up to death in London slums for the possession a big bundle of dirty money wich could save innocent lives” (31 words)

    N.B.: I don’t understand very well the difference in the use of “wich” and “that” in English.

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  2. Posted: May 27, 2013In: Public

    On the run from a determined street enforcer, a young Londoner will do anything and everything to avoid capture but the enforcer has pledged to kill himself in the event of failure.

    Jean-Marie Mazaleyrat Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 9, 2013 at 2:18 am

    I think this is the good line. The three major points are: - a duel between - a man with noble virtues fighting for a unrighteous cause and - a man without noble virtues fighting for a righteous cause. Subsidiary question : does their arcs bring closer or join?

    I think this is the good line. The three major points are:
    – a duel
    between
    – a man with noble virtues fighting for a unrighteous cause
    and
    – a man without noble virtues fighting for a righteous cause.

    Subsidiary question : does their arcs bring closer or join?

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  3. Posted: May 27, 2013In: Public

    On the run from a determined street enforcer, a young Londoner will do anything and everything to avoid capture but the enforcer has pledged to kill himself in the event of failure.

    Jean-Marie Mazaleyrat Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 9, 2013 at 1:40 am

    Hi fellows, The Lord of Strife is a tarot card: http://www.psychic.com.au/psychic-tarot-card-five-of-wands.html "The Five of the Suit of Wands will more likely than most, mean that there will be arguments, trials, and struggle, and success will only be achieved after much striving. The Five of WandsRead more

    Hi fellows,

    The Lord of Strife is a tarot card:
    http://www.psychic.com.au/psychic-tarot-card-five-of-wands.html

    “The Five of the Suit of Wands will more likely than most, mean that there will be arguments, trials, and struggle, and success will only be achieved after much striving.
    The Five of Wands or the Lord of Strife card indicates the struggle, strife, conflicts and discords that we often encounter in the achievement of our goals. This card comes up when a person is unhappy and sad because he is facing several handicaps in executing his projects which may relate not only to his business but may also involve personal relationships.

    This card also suggests that nothing can be achieved by entering into argument for argument sake. Often this situation arises because of our tendency for rashness and loss of self-control, which further engender more problems than solutions.

    The Lord of Strife card also appears when we are in a state of inner conflict, which arises when we look for easy solutions through immoral acts and are troubled by the voice of our conscience.”

    I read what follows to complete my opinion.

    JM

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