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  1. Posted: June 6, 2013In: Public

    Acting in concert, objects start to refuse to be a part of bad actions for no apparent reason

    Jean-Marie Mazaleyrat Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 6, 2013 at 9:17 pm

    Thanks to eakouri for the inspiration

    Thanks to eakouri for the inspiration

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  2. Posted: June 6, 2013In: Student Loglines

    Arrogant postman of the year fights to keep his pride, when he comes across a stubborn mailbox that won?t accept his mail.

    Jean-Marie Mazaleyrat Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 6, 2013 at 9:07 pm

    Hi eakouri Your logline and title sound like a pregnant need for revenge against one of the "jewels" of the French public service! As a Froggy tax-payer, my opinion is the following: This is a great logline for a great movie!

    Hi eakouri

    Your logline and title sound like a pregnant need for revenge against one of the “jewels” of the French public service!

    As a Froggy tax-payer, my opinion is the following:

    This is a great logline for a great movie!

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  3. Posted: June 3, 2013In: Public

    After finding out he has a month left to live, high school junior Felix Chester focuses all of his time and energy on one goal: losing his virginity to his dream girl.

    Jean-Marie Mazaleyrat Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 6, 2013 at 8:38 pm

    Hi fellows, Richiev's is quite a better logline. But I agree with him and Steven Fernandez: it emphasizes how this story is thin. I would like this experience leads the hero to something higher, and/or it introduces the girl as a second hero who joins him in this higher quest then helps him to go. CRead more

    Hi fellows,

    Richiev’s is quite a better logline.

    But I agree with him and Steven Fernandez: it emphasizes how this story is thin.

    I would like this experience leads the hero to something higher, and/or it introduces the girl as a second hero who joins him in this higher quest then helps him to go.
    Could it be a good story with dual heros?

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