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After the sudden death of his wife a man hits rock bottom only to find help from the one that killed her.
Hi You two, Richiev loglines are better. I think this story would be darker if the murderer was not in prison. It could take a depth worthy of Orson Welles. "On a quest for closure, a grieving husband strikes an unlikely friendship with his wife's murderer to discover the motive behind the crime."
Hi You two,
Richiev loglines are better.
I think this story would be darker if the murderer was not in prison. It could take a depth worthy of Orson Welles.
“On a quest for closure, a grieving husband strikes an unlikely friendship with his wife’s murderer to discover the motive behind the crime.”
See lessHere's just the concept, not an actual logline What if currency never existed ? but instead we had to trade memory's ? Our whole life's are basically memory's, we never live in the present. So what if, in the future, all of society traded in run down memory's, stored in banks. The higher class members of society are ridden with memory's. Then you have the lower class people, left to rot on the street with no memory's what so ever. There is a corrupt government which steals taxes of memory from you every month, and if you run out of memory's, you are taken in to cell 5, also known as shutdown to be 'rehabilitated'. If you want a loaf of bread that would cost you a mere memory of the last 5 minute road trip, new Aston martin ? that could cost you up to a months worth of memory's, even more. Many of you may look at this concept and think ''what a load of shit'' but it's still early days, as i'v only just started developing it. Any constructive criticism will be great !
Hi guys, I think that RichieV idea is the good way to explore this concept. ...And he already gives us two loglines in accordance whith it!
Hi guys,
I think that RichieV idea is the good way to explore this concept. …And he already gives us two loglines in accordance whith it!
See lessEspionage is the weapon of choice for husband-and-wife inventors of a new industrial process and a global corporation determined to bury technology that will save millions of lives.
One more thing please: As whe are in the world of corporate espionage, maybe there is some spy among your main characters. Isn't it? In this case, maybe your plot turns around a triangular relationship hero-spy-antagonist. This is a good way to make a strong story ... or get it all wrong.
One more thing please:
As whe are in the world of corporate espionage, maybe there is some spy among your main characters. Isn’t it?
In this case, maybe your plot turns around a triangular relationship hero-spy-antagonist. This is a good way to make a strong story … or get it all wrong.
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