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  1. Posted: September 2, 2012In: Public

    Struggling to relate to others, a pet psychiatrist spins out of control thanks to his estranged wife, a high school crush, and an obsessed cat owner.

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    Added an answer on September 3, 2012 at 9:49 pm

    LOL - ok ... how about this? An acclaimed pet psychiatrist, notorious for poor interpersonal skills, risks his career, love, and sanity at the hands of his estranged wife, a high school crush, and an obsessed cat owner.? I think I need to decide on a final version of the logline and then repost to hRead more

    LOL – ok … how about this?

    An acclaimed pet psychiatrist, notorious for poor interpersonal skills, risks his career, love, and sanity at the hands of his estranged wife, a high school crush, and an obsessed cat owner.?

    I think I need to decide on a final version of the logline and then repost to his site! LOL 🙂

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  2. Posted: August 31, 2012In: Public

    A young mineworker with considerable magical powers, yearning for a better life, manages to gain an apprenticeship with a dark group of wizards, and soon learns that finding personal happiness entails as many deadly perils as choosing sides in the struggles between power-hungry factions.

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    Added an answer on September 3, 2012 at 9:39 pm

    Agreed - "sect" is a better word. And I'm with you again - while it's good, it gives up too much (doesn't leave anything to the imagination). Question: does the MC have the ability to alter the outcome? Is that ability directly related to his magic powers? Or simply the impact of his decision to joiRead more

    Agreed – “sect” is a better word. And I’m with you again – while it’s good, it gives up too much (doesn’t leave anything to the imagination).

    Question: does the MC have the ability to alter the outcome? Is that ability directly related to his magic powers? Or simply the impact of his decision to join one sect or the other?

    If you want to share your 30-pager with me, then that could help me wrap my arms around this one.

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  3. Posted: August 31, 2012In: Public

    A young mineworker with considerable magical powers, yearning for a better life, manages to gain an apprenticeship with a dark group of wizards, and soon learns that finding personal happiness entails as many deadly perils as choosing sides in the struggles between power-hungry factions.

    Screenwriters Anonymous
    Added an answer on September 3, 2012 at 8:13 am

    Ok, back to the drawing board. We can make some adjustments. So if he comes INTO the magic powers, then how about this? A mineworker, who struggles to control his newfound magical powers, earns an apprenticeship with a group of dupliticitous wizards and discovers that he can only live the life he seRead more

    Ok, back to the drawing board. We can make some adjustments. So if he comes INTO the magic powers, then how about this?

    A mineworker, who struggles to control his newfound magical powers, earns an apprenticeship with a group of dupliticitous wizards and discovers that he can only live the life he seeks by choosing between warring, power-hungry factions.?

    Not giving up on this!! 🙂 Let me know if this works; otherwise, we can bounce ideas back and forth until we get there.

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