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  1. Posted: September 2, 2012In: Public

    Struggling to relate to others, a pet psychiatrist spins out of control thanks to his estranged wife, a high school crush, and an obsessed cat owner.

    Screenwriters Anonymous
    Added an answer on September 3, 2012 at 4:33 am

    Correct ? his inability to relate to people has brought this spectrum of conflict into his life. And being a pet psychiatrist infers that he?s comfortable with animals ? and just really bad at dealing with people.

    Correct ? his inability to relate to people has brought this spectrum of conflict into his life. And being a pet psychiatrist infers that he?s comfortable with animals ? and just really bad at dealing with people.

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  2. Posted: September 2, 2012In: Public

    Struggling to relate to others, a pet psychiatrist spins out of control thanks to his estranged wife, a high school crush, and an obsessed cat owner.

    Screenwriters Anonymous
    Added an answer on September 3, 2012 at 4:32 am

    Correct - his inability to relate to people has brought this spectrum of conflict into his life. And being a pet psychiatrist infers that he's comfortable with animals ... and just really bad at dealing with people. :-)

    Correct – his inability to relate to people has brought this spectrum of conflict into his life. And being a pet psychiatrist infers that he’s comfortable with animals … and just really bad at dealing with people. 🙂

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  3. Posted: September 1, 2012In: Public

    Waking from a four year coma David is told his daughter just died. He joins a counselling group, but it's three months before his daughter dies. He wants to change his daughters future, the counsellor argues it isn't possible.

    Screenwriters Anonymous
    Added an answer on September 2, 2012 at 10:12 pm

    I respectfully disagree with MC's feedback. Where we are that the original logline is too wordy and needs to punch us in as few words as possible, I don't find the counselor plug to be essential to the logline because it's too "on the nose". Of course, a counselor will say it's impossible - readersRead more

    I respectfully disagree with MC’s feedback. Where we are that the original logline is too wordy and needs to punch us in as few words as possible, I don’t find the counselor plug to be essential to the logline because it’s too “on the nose”. Of course, a counselor will say it’s impossible – readers are smart enough to think that.

    How about this:

    After the death of his daughter, a father awakes from a four year coma and learns he has three months to prevent his daughter?s demise.?

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