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When a dubious pet psychiatrist loses his wife to his richest client, his high school crush helps him decide: steal his wife back or keep his client's bribe to save his practice?
Or I've contemplated this one: "When a dubious pet psychiatrist loses his wife to his richest client, can a high school crush and obsessed cat owner help him rescue his practice and self-worth?" When he loses his wife to his richest client, it's perfectly implied (at least to me - hopefully you'll aRead more
Or I’ve contemplated this one: “When a dubious pet psychiatrist loses his wife to his richest client, can a high school crush and obsessed cat owner help him rescue his practice and self-worth?”
When he loses his wife to his richest client, it’s perfectly implied (at least to me – hopefully you’ll agree, but please let me know) that the client will fuel the conflict. Threatens the protag’s business practice. Robs him of his self-worth when his wife leaves for her new beau.
See less?When a dubious pet psychiatrist loses his wife to his richest client, can a high school crush and obsessed cat owner rescue his practice and self-worth??
Yes, agreed - ended up mistakenly omitting some words. Will be reposting with a new and improved line. Thanks for the comments guys!!
Yes, agreed – ended up mistakenly omitting some words. Will be reposting with a new and improved line. Thanks for the comments guys!!
See lessStruggling to relate to others, a pet psychiatrist spins out of control thanks to his estranged wife, a high school crush, and an obsessed cat owner.
Hey Andrew! Sorry for the delay in my response. By the way, love the zombie avatar! "Walking Dead" returns Oct 14th ... can't wait! After further consideration (and relating back to my four page treatment I recently completed), I'm moving away from the "poor relationship skills" theme and moving morRead more
Hey Andrew!
Sorry for the delay in my response. By the way, love the zombie avatar! “Walking Dead” returns Oct 14th … can’t wait!
After further consideration (and relating back to my four page treatment I recently completed), I’m moving away from the “poor relationship skills” theme and moving more in the way of it being driven more by money issues.
I like your logline – it resonates more with the direction I’m going in. How about this slight revision to your suggestion:
“When a dubious pet psychiatrist loses his wife to his richest client, can a high school crush and obsessed cat owner rescue his practice and self-worth?”
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