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A special ops team made up of foreign soldiers as well as Americans do special ops missions across the world. until they are setup by their own government, forcing them to go into hiding.
Try to answer all of the "editorial" questions: who, what, where, when, why (perhaps how, too). Also, consolidate the logline to no more than two sentences. And have a hook - this is your elevator pitch. Make it unique! For instance, spec ops team of the world's best soldiers is forced to fight theiRead more
Try to answer all of the “editorial” questions: who, what, where, when, why (perhaps how, too). Also, consolidate the logline to no more than two sentences. And have a hook – this is your elevator pitch. Make it unique! For instance, spec ops team of the world’s best soldiers is forced to fight their governments (not “hide” – there’s no honor in hiding) … but not because they were set up … sure, the gov’t screwed them somehow, but for what reason? To create “One World Order”? etc etc … give it a whirl and repost. And please let me know when.
See lessWhen orphan Billy and his friends accidentally land on Carnival Cloud they discover Cloud Surfing, Pirate Kingdoms, Pet Paradise, a school with bully boats, new friends and that anything?s possible…now to find a way home.
I like the change in seasons ... that's a great idea! In terms of irony, I see the "family dynamic" as the other side of the coin when we consider an "orphan". Heaven versus Hell .... so on and so forth. Looking forward to reading your revision!
I like the change in seasons … that’s a great idea!
In terms of irony, I see the “family dynamic” as the other side of the coin when we consider an “orphan”. Heaven versus Hell …. so on and so forth.
Looking forward to reading your revision!
See lessA young African-American woman and her family flee from her violent father in 1960s deep south. Amidst rock star fame in the 1970s, however, she discovers that she may be the very thing she had hated as a child.
Suggestion to shape a clear and concise logline: "Amidst rock star fame in the 1970s, an African-American woman discovers that she has become the very thing she feared as a child: an abusive parent."
Suggestion to shape a clear and concise logline:
“Amidst rock star fame in the 1970s, an African-American woman discovers that she has become the very thing she feared as a child: an abusive parent.”
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