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A who woman seeks help is murdered. Driven by a sense of moral obligation Kaameleon breaks a promise and returns to prison. Beaten, starved, terrorized and humiliated. Can he survive the sadistic guard targeting him to find what happened to five missing inmates? Kaameleon?s personality is the driving force keeping his people working to insure his survival.
Carang, check out our suggestions on how to write a logline here: https://loglines.org/howto. Then try to do it in one sentence. And avoid typos. It doesn't look good when your second words shouldn't be there...
Carang, check out our suggestions on how to write a logline here: https://loglines.org/howto.
Then try to do it in one sentence.
And avoid typos. It doesn’t look good when your second words shouldn’t be there…
See lessThree generations of superheroes attempt to make peace with one another against the backdrop of history.
Is The Blue Knight an existing movie or your original concept? Forgive me, I'm not 100% up to speed with the superhero realm. Judging from this sentence (I wouldn't call it a logline - yet) there may very well be a great concept, but... 1. "make peace" is the opposite of makes for good drama... BefoRead more
Is The Blue Knight an existing movie or your original concept? Forgive me, I’m not 100% up to speed with the superhero realm.
Judging from this sentence (I wouldn’t call it a logline – yet) there may very well be a great concept, but…
1. “make peace” is the opposite of makes for good drama… Before they make peace, they fight. How? What are their super powers? Why? What have they done to each other.
See less2. Three generations: you may be diluting the story. It is hard enough to tell a compelling tale about one character. To do three is a job for an experienced screenwriters. Are you?
3. Cut “with one another”. In a logline, every word counts.
– Ten-year-old Arkie?s quest to find her friend Blister takes her into a strange and beautiful world, in which she must overcome her darkest fears in order to save him and fulfil her destiny
These inner-journey-only loglines are doing my head in. Even if there is a good story underneath, WE NEED TO KNOW WHAT IT IS. It keeps baffling me how this type of loglines can be published on the web site of Australia's main funding agency. All it does is proving that the filmmakers have no idea hoRead more
These inner-journey-only loglines are doing my head in.
Even if there is a good story underneath, WE NEED TO KNOW WHAT IT IS.
It keeps baffling me how this type of loglines can be published on the web site of Australia’s main funding agency. All it does is proving that the filmmakers have no idea how to sell their films.
“a strange and beautiful world, in which she must overcome her darkest fears in order to save him and fulfil her destiny ” This is as vague as it gets. What sort of world is this? Outer space? The jungle? Deep ocean?
“overcome the darkest fears” is what EVERY transformational character does, as goes for ‘fulfil her destiny’
In my view, these loglines betray our own funding gatekeepers’ lack of understanding of film marketing.
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