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  1. Posted: February 13, 2015In: Public

    Set in a gangland drinking den over a single night, a bounty hunter who sees flash visions of the future holds patrons hostage in order to trap an escaped prisoner but soon discovers the imminent arrival of a totally different kind of fugitive: a killer able to freeze time and project illusions.

    kbfilmworks Samurai
    Added an answer on February 13, 2015 at 9:21 pm

    Hi LP, thanks for the comment. As an aside, here's a link to a list of loglines of films by first-timers that have been sold to Hollywood studios.http://gointothestory.blcklst.com/2013/01/spec-script-sales-analysis-2012-first-timers.html

    Hi LP, thanks for the comment.

    As an aside, here’s a link to a list of loglines of films by first-timers that have been sold to Hollywood studios.http://gointothestory.blcklst.com/2013/01/spec-script-sales-analysis-2012-first-timers.html

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  2. Posted: February 12, 2015In: Public

    When an ancient spell book activates a cursed family heirloom, a part-time occult librarian teams up with an undead ex-cop to destroy a voodoo witchdoctor stealing souls to live forever.

    kbfilmworks Samurai
    Added an answer on February 13, 2015 at 4:48 am

    How does the curse affect the occult librarian? I think you need to include that in the logline. That would be his motivation for teaming up with the ex-cop and their mission. As an aside, I think too often on this forum comments seem to stem from the need to vent emotionally. I know writers are a fRead more

    How does the curse affect the occult librarian? I think you need to include that in the logline. That would be his motivation for teaming up with the ex-cop and their mission.

    As an aside, I think too often on this forum comments seem to stem from the need to vent emotionally. I know writers are a frustrated bunch but what people working on their loglines need most is constructive criticism and sugestions for improvement – not putdowns. Especially considering that a putdown often leads to a barbed response and people who live in glass houses, etc.

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  3. Posted: February 12, 2015In: Public

    When an ancient spell book activates a cursed family heirloom, a part-time occult librarian teams up with an undead ex-cop to destroy a voodoo witchdoctor stealing souls to live forever.

    kbfilmworks Samurai
    Added an answer on February 13, 2015 at 4:48 am

    How does the curse affect the occult librarian? I think you need to include that in the logline. That would be his motivation for teaming up with the ex-cop and their mission. As an aside, I think too often on this forum comments seem to stem from the need to vent emotionally. I know writers are a fRead more

    How does the curse affect the occult librarian? I think you need to include that in the logline. That would be his motivation for teaming up with the ex-cop and their mission.

    As an aside, I think too often on this forum comments seem to stem from the need to vent emotionally. I know writers are a frustrated bunch but what people working on their loglines need most is constructive criticism and sugestions for improvement – not putdowns. Especially considering that a putdown often leads to a barbed response and people who live in glass houses, etc.

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