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    In the final moments before facing the firing squad, the charismatic leader of a murderous robbery gang makes one last request: to have her confession heard by the priest who was once her lover.

    kbfilmworks Samurai

    Hi dpg, The screenplay shares the same structure as 'Amadeus' - it's a story that's told in flashback because the narrator is confessing past sins - again - to a priest. And yes, they are dealing with the 'here and now' - the knowledge that death is imminent and the need to reflect on the past. It'sRead more

    Hi dpg,

    The screenplay shares the same structure as ‘Amadeus’ – it’s a story that’s told in flashback because the narrator is confessing past sins – again – to a priest. And yes, they are dealing with the ‘here and now’ – the knowledge that death is imminent and the need to reflect on the past. It’s human.

    Here is the imdb logline for Amadeus: The incredible story of Wolfgang Amadeus Mozart, told by his peer and secret rival, Antonio Saleri – now confined to an insane asylum.

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  2. Posted: November 2, 2014In:

    In the final moments before facing the firing squad, the charismatic leader of a murderous robbery gang makes one last request: to have her confession heard by the priest who was once her lover.

    kbfilmworks Samurai

    Here is a revised draft addressing your comments.

    Here is a revised draft addressing your comments.

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  3. Posted: November 2, 2014In:

    In the final moments before facing the firing squad, the charismatic leader of a murderous robbery gang makes one last request: to have her confession heard by the priest who was once her lover.

    kbfilmworks Samurai

    Here is a revised draft addressing your comments.

    Here is a revised draft addressing your comments.

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