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  1. Posted: October 22, 2014In: Public

    In an attempt to bury his past, a former marine heads home only to be infected with the consciousness of a ruthless killer.

    kbfilmworks Samurai
    Added an answer on November 2, 2014 at 7:38 pm

    Hi there, Cool concept. I think a few words about the process by which he becomes infected by the killer's consciousness will clue us into genre. Is it horror, sci-fi or even a combination of both? Or something else entirely?

    Hi there,

    Cool concept. I think a few words about the process by which he becomes infected by the killer’s consciousness will clue us into genre. Is it horror, sci-fi or even a combination of both? Or something else entirely?

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  2. Posted: April 28, 2013

    On the run from a Yakuza enforcer, a young Londoner would rather die than be captured but the enforcer is under oath to kill himself if he fails.

    kbfilmworks Samurai
    Added an answer on January 4, 2014 at 10:16 pm

    Hi EdgeWriter, Yeah, I posted a few variations of this logline. At the time I didn't fully understand the rules. Apology. After a total of about 100 comments, in my view, dpg totally and irrevocably nailed it with: a fearsome street enforcer pledges to kill himself if he fails to kill a penniless drRead more

    Hi EdgeWriter,

    Yeah, I posted a few variations of this logline. At the time I didn’t fully understand the rules. Apology.

    After a total of about 100 comments, in my view, dpg totally and irrevocably nailed it with: a fearsome street enforcer pledges to kill himself if he fails to kill a penniless drifter who seeks personal redemption by defending innocent people from the enforcer’s boss.

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  3. Posted: June 24, 2013In: Public

    In the future, the UK is completely overseen by CCTV. There are three blind spots, and in one week four men must organise three high-profile murders ? one to take place in each.

    kbfilmworks Samurai
    Added an answer on June 24, 2013 at 7:28 am

    Actually, patmonger, what you have is a premise - not a logline which usually requires a protagonist, an antagonist, a conflict and dramatic stakes for the protagonist.

    Actually, patmonger, what you have is a premise – not a logline which usually requires a protagonist, an antagonist, a conflict and dramatic stakes for the protagonist.

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