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On the run from a determined street enforcer, a young Londoner will do anything and everything to avoid capture but the enforcer has pledged to kill himself in the event of failure.
Hi Phoenix, thanks. Golden Dawn? I went and googled it. A bunch of right wing Greek extremists who hate immigrants? No offence taken. Or is there another GD? Why do you ask? Does my logline suggest a GD influence?
Hi Phoenix, thanks. Golden Dawn? I went and googled it. A bunch of right wing Greek extremists who hate immigrants? No offence taken. Or is there another GD? Why do you ask? Does my logline suggest a GD influence?
See lessGripped by mid-life crisis a 46 year old teacher decides to try an adventure holiday and learns the importance of life on the bloodied streets of Kathmandu.
Hi, I think you need to add detail - what's the conflict? who's the antagonist? What's at stake? I think, you've presented the set-up for your story and then skirted round the drama.
Hi, I think you need to add detail – what’s the conflict? who’s the antagonist? What’s at stake? I think, you’ve presented the set-up for your story and then skirted round the drama.
See lessOn the run from a determined street enforcer, a young Londoner will do anything and everything to avoid capture but the enforcer has pledged to kill himself in the event of failure.
Many thanks to Nicholasandrewhalls, dfitzp, Richiev, Anonymous, dpg, Tony Edwards & Jean-Marie Mazaleyrat - for helping to create a cracking logline. Couldn't have done it without you, guys.