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Clashing husband-and-wife inventors of a new process to design life-saving drugs need to settle their differences in time to fight off a global corporation using espionage tactics to bury an invention that will save millions of lives.
It's a suspense thriller in a similar vein to Alfred Hitchcock's Notorious. So, the relationship plot is what makes the journey worthwhile and the action plot provides the framework to dramatize the relationship. Plus, trying to keep it relevant to the times by addressing a hot topic - greedy globalRead more
It’s a suspense thriller in a similar vein to Alfred Hitchcock’s Notorious. So, the relationship plot is what makes the journey worthwhile and the action plot provides the framework to dramatize the relationship. Plus, trying to keep it relevant to the times by addressing a hot topic – greedy global corporations and why we like them just the way they are – despite all the criticism and condemnation.
See lessA forensic photographer on stress leave takes the pilgrimage home, only to become embroiled in a cold case from her youth. What she discovers is her worst nightmare. What she finds is redemption.
Seriously cool idea. I think you need to forget the 'stress leaves takes the pilgrimage home' bit - your set-up. And detail the actual story - 'the cold case from her youth' - and also detail the complication 'what she discovers is her worst nightmare'. Finally, I suggest you jettison the bit aboutRead more
Seriously cool idea. I think you need to forget the ‘stress leaves takes the pilgrimage home’ bit – your set-up. And detail the actual story – ‘the cold case from her youth’ – and also detail the complication ‘what she discovers is her worst nightmare’. Finally, I suggest you jettison the bit about redemption – I’m supposing that’s your ending – in which case it’s not required in your logline. Hope this helps.
See lessEspionage is the weapon of choice for husband-and-wife inventors of a new industrial process and a global corporation determined to bury technology that will save millions of lives.
David versus Goliath in the smoke-and-mirrors world of corporate espionage.
David versus Goliath in the smoke-and-mirrors world of corporate espionage.
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