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  1. Posted: June 21, 2015In: Public

    A young woman imprisoned in Greenland must prepare for her eventual release while at the same time dealing with the issue of guilt.

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    Added an answer on June 22, 2015 at 7:39 am

    I like the irony in this logline, but I do feel the stakes could be raised somewhat. Keep him / her having the element of guilt in their lives, but perhaps on release he has decided to turn against his mobster family and be a narc for the police, but the more he stays with them the more he'll becomeRead more

    I like the irony in this logline, but I do feel the stakes could be raised somewhat. Keep him / her having the element of guilt in their lives, but perhaps on release he has decided to turn against his mobster family and be a narc for the police, but the more he stays with them the more he’ll become conflicted to protect the ones who betrayed him.

    I don’t know, like I said I like the he is getting released, but perhaps is guilty. However seeing as he served time we would assume that, maybe if he was found innocent of a crime, and now people are after him because they think the only way he could have got away with it was to become an informant, so in an odd twist to the detective genre he could be trying to prove his guilt to avoid retribution.

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  2. Posted: April 30, 2015In: Public

    When he’s diagnosed with cancer, a failed writer steals cocaine from a terrifying drug lord to give him the material he needs to write a bestselling screenplay to ensure his family’s future is secure.

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    Added an answer on April 30, 2015 at 1:56 pm

    Thank you. I wanted to add the element of an antagonist that could stand in his way, and even though he wants to do right by his family, there will also be an element that perhaps he is trying to get himself killed because he is scared to go through the pain and suffering that is too come and needsRead more

    Thank you.

    I wanted to add the element of an antagonist that could stand in his way, and even though he wants to do right by his family, there will also be an element that perhaps he is trying to get himself killed because he is scared to go through the pain and suffering that is too come and needs to learn that just because he is dying he can’t be cavalier with his life in the meantime.

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  3. Posted: April 24, 2015In: Public

    When a disgraced former agent starts seeing a hallucination claiming to be a AI downloaded into his mind, he must team with his secretive partner to stop the agent’s former clandestine agency from activating a devastating machine the AI’s designed to protect.

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    Added an answer on April 25, 2015 at 7:55 am

    Thanks that helps a lot. I'll look to make some tweaks

    Thanks that helps a lot. I’ll look to make some tweaks

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