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  1. Posted: April 24, 2015In: Public

    When a disgraced former agent starts seeing a hallucination claiming to be a AI downloaded into his mind, he must team with his secretive partner to stop the agent’s former clandestine agency from activating a devastating machine the AI’s designed to protect.

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    Added an answer on April 25, 2015 at 7:53 am

    I wasn't sure if I should put that in the logline or save it for the story

    I wasn’t sure if I should put that in the logline or save it for the story

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  2. Posted: April 24, 2015In: Public

    A backyard drug cook tests a new formula on her willing friends. It produces hallucination turning them into murderous, sadistic adversaries. She must survive their attacks as they slip deeper into madness.

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    Added an answer on April 24, 2015 at 7:25 pm

    Agree with the above. I don't know if it'd make it too clunky, but could try including a why they test it on the friends, E.G. In an attempt to fend off competition a backyard drug cook secretly tests a new drug on his friends, but must survive their attacks when it turns them all into zombie like sRead more

    Agree with the above. I don’t know if it’d make it too clunky, but could try including a why they test it on the friends, E.G. In an attempt to fend off competition a backyard drug cook secretly tests a new drug on his friends, but must survive their attacks when it turns them all into zombie like savages.

    Like I said that isn’t perfect, but I think testing it on unwilling or unknowing people means they’ll be more desperate to save them as they never knew what they were getting into.

    Hope that makes sense and helps. Overall I like the idea, as the hallucinations could be played up to kelp you guessing if they have taken or has. The protagonist and he is huntin them.

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  3. Posted: April 21, 2015In: Public

    When a distrusting telepath learns his whole life has been a lie, he must take on the shadowy agency he works for to uncover his real past.

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    Added an answer on April 22, 2015 at 8:12 am

    I guess looking for a way of saying he is suffering from an identity crisis about the type of person he wants to be and discovers that his past, the foundation of who he is false

    I guess looking for a way of saying he is suffering from an identity crisis about the type of person he wants to be and discovers that his past, the foundation of who he is false

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