Knightrider – Reviews – Page 42

Posted: April 21, 2015In: Public

When a distrusting telepath learns his whole life has been a lie, he must take on the shadowy agency he works for to uncover his real past.

Added an answer on April 22, 2015 at 6:17 am

Cheers for the feedback. Yep, the excitement I get when I think about where I can take this story makes me want to write it. But I have to start from a solid foundation, which means nailing a logline which I am trying to do. And thanks for all the feedback I should be able to do that.

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Posted: April 21, 2015In: Public

When a distrusting telepath learns his whole life has been a lie, he must take on the shadowy agency he works for to uncover his real past.

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Added an answer on April 22, 2015 at 6:15 am

Thanks, I really appreciate the feedback. I do see where you are coming from, but I am trying to make my point of difference is the fact these are people who are brought into an agency who have been shaping the future of nations, wars etc, so he is someone who has spent his controlling others only tRead more

Thanks, I really appreciate the feedback.

I do see where you are coming from, but I am trying to make my point of difference is the fact these are people who are brought into an agency who have been shaping the future of nations, wars etc, so he is someone who has spent his controlling others only to discover that his whole life has been under someone else’s control, so I would be playing with themes of Nature vs Nurture and Freewill etc.

I would also hopefully take it in a more spy thriller direction than scifi.

So, the story would revolve around a guy trying to discover who he is, but in doing so discovers a plan by his agency to control on a global scale so he has to decide who he is? A product of his past or is he really free to choose his future?

I like your take on the Line though it is a big help.

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