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  1. Posted: March 5, 2015In: Public

    When a reckless special agent, who’s enhanced with mind control technology, is hacked and made to kill his own team, he must expose his would-be puppeteers to prove his innocence, but the closer he gets, the more he finds himself asking: Is he a puppet, and, if so, who’s pulling the strings?

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    Added an answer on March 8, 2015 at 1:42 pm

    I guess the theme I am trying to explore is that element of: Is it right to alter, surpress or even flat out control elements of what makes us human makes us free willed if these changes enhance us for the better, removes the element of chance in our upbringing long story short: Should we alter oursRead more

    I guess the theme I am trying to explore is that element of: Is it right to alter, surpress or even flat out control elements of what makes us human makes us free willed if these changes enhance us for the better, removes the element of chance in our upbringing long story short: Should we alter ourselves to ensure our pursuit of altruistic goals or is free will worth all the pain, problems etc that come with certain selfish desires.

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  2. Posted: March 5, 2015In: Public

    When a reckless special agent, who’s enhanced with mind control technology, is hacked and made to kill his own team, he must expose his would-be puppeteers to prove his innocence, but the closer he gets, the more he finds himself asking: Is he a puppet, and, if so, who’s pulling the strings?

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    Added an answer on March 7, 2015 at 6:09 pm

    I changed it once again as I want this guy to be someone who does perhaps morally questionable work, but it affects him he is someone who doubts what he does but sees the benefits but now he must deal with someone who can potentially do something that will make him have to question what is more impoRead more

    I changed it once again as I want this guy to be someone who does perhaps morally questionable work, but it affects him he is someone who doubts what he does but sees the benefits but now he must deal with someone who can potentially do something that will make him have to question what is more important what is right or what is best

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  3. Posted: March 5, 2015In: Public

    When a reckless special agent, who’s enhanced with mind control technology, is hacked and made to kill his own team, he must expose his would-be puppeteers to prove his innocence, but the closer he gets, the more he finds himself asking: Is he a puppet, and, if so, who’s pulling the strings?

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    Added an answer on March 7, 2015 at 12:17 pm

    Thanks for your advised. I have tweaked the logline to make him someone who is potentially afraid to make the tough decisions, someone who sees and is affected by the choices he makes. I also took out the aspect about him being a mind controller to get to the point and focus on the character flaw.

    Thanks for your advised. I have tweaked the logline to make him someone who is potentially afraid to make the tough decisions, someone who sees and is affected by the choices he makes. I also took out the aspect about him being a mind controller to get to the point and focus on the character flaw.

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