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  1. Posted: April 13, 2015In: Public

    A low-level thief goes back in time to alter his family’s life for the better, but discovers his changes have created a new timeline where his wife is dead. As he attempts to reset the timeline, he’ll find himself hunted by his powerful alternate self who’s determined to hold onto this new future.

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    Added an answer on April 14, 2015 at 7:00 am

    Na, I liked him in the first Die Hard movie, as back then I saw him as a modern day John Wayne, and the building he was fighting in was just another take on the Old Western Town where the bad guys role in and terrorise the town's folk. For me personally, I wanted to almost do a twist on the ChristmaRead more

    Na, I liked him in the first Die Hard movie, as back then I saw him as a modern day John Wayne, and the building he was fighting in was just another take on the Old Western Town where the bad guys role in and terrorise the town’s folk.

    For me personally, I wanted to almost do a twist on the Christmas Carol, where he sees his future, his past and what it will be like if he doesn’t change, but I was also inspired by A Wonderful Life, so I also wanted to show an element of being shown a world where apparently he has gotten everything e has ever dreamed of, but never actually earned any of it, and how that has truly eaten away at him over the years to know he is a fraud, and because of this the society he helped build began to crumble and tear at the seems.

    So, I don’t want him to be a wise cracking guy, however he has to be that everyman embodiment, that person we can relate to because we have all tried to be something, accomplish something and felt the seemingly impossible odds against us, this is the story of someone who finally learns that the only way he is every going to be something is by learning to never fear failure, and to dust him self off whenever he falls and persevere when others around him give up.

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  2. Posted: March 5, 2015In: Public

    When a reckless special agent, who’s enhanced with mind control technology, is hacked and made to kill his own team, he must expose his would-be puppeteers to prove his innocence, but the closer he gets, the more he finds himself asking: Is he a puppet, and, if so, who’s pulling the strings?

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    Added an answer on March 9, 2015 at 1:02 pm

    Yep, I think maybe at the midpoint or 3rd act would be a good time to at least raise the possibility the the whole time he has been on his mission he may have been controlled all along, then can set up a scene where he'll have a choice to believe that the last 48 hours since the shooting he has beenRead more

    Yep, I think maybe at the midpoint or 3rd act would be a good time to at least raise the possibility the the whole time he has been on his mission he may have been controlled all along, then can set up a scene where he’ll have a choice to believe that the last 48 hours since the shooting he has been in control or accept that he “never woke up” so to speak and has been under the control of someone since the shooting and all he’s been through has been the result of someone hacking his mind.

    It’ll be great to play up both sides and kinda give that Sophie’s choice element at the end.

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  3. Posted: March 5, 2015In: Public

    When a reckless special agent, who’s enhanced with mind control technology, is hacked and made to kill his own team, he must expose his would-be puppeteers to prove his innocence, but the closer he gets, the more he finds himself asking: Is he a puppet, and, if so, who’s pulling the strings?

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    Added an answer on March 9, 2015 at 9:37 am

    Yes he does. However, during the his attack, he is deactivated - meaning the technology within his head that gives him the ability to control others, but in this case be controlled is no longer working. Thus he can't be controlled any longer. This gives him a slight advantage and disadvantage, it meRead more

    Yes he does.

    However, during the his attack, he is deactivated – meaning the technology within his head that gives him the ability to control others, but in this case be controlled is no longer working. Thus he can’t be controlled any longer. This gives him a slight advantage and disadvantage, it means he can’t be hacked, but also means he can no longer control others.

    Hopefully that has cleared things up.

    Although it might be an element that I play up throughout the story that during his mission he’ll begin to question if what he is doing is really him or the work of someone else.

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